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inkedgoddess
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0 posted 2004-06-11 09:24 AM


They came for me;

in rounds of twenty,

too obvious now,
to go unseen,

in pastel rings
of summer themes

they came for me;

my glance upon
their envied wings,

continue flight,

they sing !!!!!

and brought me
home, within
these dreams,

they came for me;

and reached between,

unwrapped these woes
i sewed within,
these tired seams,

they came for me,

as heartbreak passed,

now time again,

resume the dream.

© Copyright 2004 inkedgoddess - All Rights Reserved
LeeJ
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1 posted 2004-06-11 09:25 AM


Beautiful!
Enchantress
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Canada eh.
2 posted 2004-06-11 09:27 AM


Perfectly lovely Michele!
Love your style.
Hugs~

~Somewhere in my heart I'm always
Dancing with you in the summer rain~

Marshalzu
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3 posted 2004-06-11 09:30 AM


Wonderful writing, one for my library

Andrew

Hmm...

gemjop
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4 posted 2004-06-11 09:56 AM


one massive massive sigh.

Whenever you write of nature, trees, animals, weather, soil, seasons, your writes seem to come alive with something too special for words.  

library, for sure.

garysgirl
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5 posted 2004-06-11 10:24 AM


This is so beautiful, Michelle.
Made a very pretty scene in my minds eye.

Susan
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6 posted 2004-06-11 10:26 AM


Very nice.

Susan

The whole of the Universe resides within each individual heart.

vandana
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7 posted 2004-06-11 05:07 PM


liked it
inkedgoddess
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8 posted 2004-06-11 09:25 PM


thanks guys
bklynboy
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9 posted 2004-06-11 10:56 PM


Very nice and enjoyable
inkedgoddess
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10 posted 2004-06-12 06:47 AM



ThisDiamond
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since 2002-02-22
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11 posted 2004-06-12 11:36 PM


Thoroughly enjoyed the stretch into a new format...the same beautiful gift in brilliant new clothes.
Like the very butterfly.
TD

iliana
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12 posted 2004-06-13 12:22 PM


Inked one, here come some more etc.!
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