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Marshalzu
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Lurking

0 posted 2004-06-11 08:36 AM


Winged.

  White wings
         swept back
                 and held
in heavenly shroud of light,
the golden halo of a warming sun

*

The bluest morning sky
holds little cloud

*
Swift messenger of doubt
innocence dispatched
the cloak cast off in anger

*
Lofty winged missile
at home in the clouds
s
   h
a
t
       t
e
  r
s
the peace in the street.

Hmm...

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1 posted 2004-06-11 12:40 PM


Er... I'm not sure what to make of this, but it's so you. I haven't seen anything in this style for a while from you. Good stuff indeed.
inkedgoddess
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2 posted 2004-06-11 01:24 PM


change the missile into a bird of peace........very nice work
Susan
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3 posted 2004-06-11 03:10 PM


Very interesting read.  It's as if innocence was taken by cruel reality?  Give me my rose colored glasses any day.

Susan

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4 posted 2004-06-11 05:22 PM


Andrew~
I certainly have nothing but admiration for the author of this beauty~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram <))><

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