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Seymour Tabin
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0 posted 2004-06-11 07:17 AM


Apart

Although we seem to be apart
You are the focus of my art
You’re the conversation of flame
You are the purpose and the aim

You occupy my inner eye
You are the song I seem to sigh
Fill the filigree of my heart
You are the beating living part.

I hold you in my mental play
You are the sunshine of my day
The star that guides me through the night
The morning’s dew that forms in light

You are my season of mature
You are my reason to endure
You are the blessing of my grace
You are a place I hold in space

You are the bubble of my sphere.
In other words I love you dear

© Copyright 2004 Seymour Tabin - All Rights Reserved
LeeJ
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1 posted 2004-06-11 07:29 AM


simply beautiful...

Good Morning Sy and happy Friday to ya

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2 posted 2004-06-11 07:51 AM


Oh, Seymour my friend. This is beautiful. I am placing this jewel very gently into my library. hugs, Chris

   Life itself is the most wonderful fairy tale.
                                          Hans Christian Anderson

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3 posted 2004-06-11 08:30 AM



She glows...

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4 posted 2004-06-11 08:47 AM


How very beautiful Sy!
~Morning hugs & tea, Nancy~

scorpio
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5 posted 2004-06-11 08:52 AM


Very romantic Sy.  "You are the bubble of my sphere"...pure inspiration.

believe in what your heart feels...

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6 posted 2004-06-11 09:11 AM


occupy my inner eye
You are the song I seem to sigh
Fill the filigree of my heart
You are the beating living part.

I hold you in my mental play
You are the sunshine of my day
The star that guides me through the night
The morning’s dew that forms in light

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Well just look at you...
hanging the moon and making the moths swoon.  


Sybabes...when you and Randy write heart-on-sleeve--its rhymed reprieve.

your tender render touches me...
gotta love your "touchless touch" that means so much.

*ww*


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7 posted 2004-06-11 10:18 AM


Very beautiful Seymour. Hsve a good
Friday and weekend.

Susan
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8 posted 2004-06-11 10:25 AM


So very sweet and loving -- sigh, smile.

Susan

The whole of the Universe resides within each individual heart.

Martie
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9 posted 2004-06-11 10:45 AM




to be the apple of your eye
would be a bit of lovely, Sy!


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10 posted 2004-06-11 11:13 AM


nice
Seymour Tabin
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11 posted 2004-06-11 11:27 AM


LeeJ
Good morning and happy friday to you.

Chris,
You are a sweetheart.

Sunshine
Love you too.

Nancy,


scorpio
How nice, thank you.

JM,
That's funny I feel the same about you.
WWRS

garysgirl
Thank you dear.

Susan
Thanks for the sigh and smile.

Martie


vandana
Thank you dear.

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12 posted 2004-06-11 11:36 AM


Mr. T. ~ I could read your poetry forevermore!

This poem radiates the true purity of love ~ of which you, yourself, are.

May you receive back tenfold all the love, wisdom, and beauty that you radiate from your wonderful self!


EA

Seymour Tabin
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13 posted 2004-06-11 12:00 PM


Earth Angel
Then to you I send twenty fold.

Marge Tindal
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14 posted 2004-06-11 05:33 PM


Seymour~
If you stuck your head outside, you would hear a *sigh* all the way from DeLand to Tamarac~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram <))><

noles1@totcon.com

Seymour Tabin
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15 posted 2004-06-11 06:04 PM


Marge,
Thank you sweety.

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16 posted 2004-06-15 12:27 PM


precious!

I've missed reading you.

iliana
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17 posted 2004-06-15 04:36 PM


X O X O X O X O X O ! ! !
Seymour Tabin
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18 posted 2004-06-15 08:48 PM


passing  
Thank you sweet.

iliana

iliana
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Seymour Tabin
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20 posted 2004-06-16 07:17 AM


iliana
Thank you dear.

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