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Cheyenna Wine
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Cheyenna Wine |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside 
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~*~ I have scaled the rise climbing mountains, one after another turning away and slightly revised. Landing upon a peaceful plateau, rows of contrast pour from the sun, a private vintage bottled up tight. Winding around grapevines pruned and distilled with careful attention, a harvest without clinging labeled Cheyenna. Like a fine wine dapples in gold draping the landscape completes the bouquet. My arm in your arms, breathing, breathing. ~*~ |
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Honeybunch Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-29
Posts 7115South Africa |
Lovely, simply lovely, Bluesy gal. |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
*Hugs* Helen dear, and thank you~ |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
been looking for you... hoping everything is ok love and miss you  M |
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Nightshade 
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Like a fine wine dapples in gold draping the landscape completes the bouquet. My arm in your arms, breathing, breathing. Lovely Bluesylady !! hugging you in thoughts, Chris |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Lovely dear Lori.. My favourite stanza is the same as my sisters. ~Smiles & Hugs Nancy~ ~Somewhere in my heart I'm always |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
breathlessy and bluelessly loverly so nice to see your breeze in again blondie |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Like a fine wine dapples in gold draping the landscape completes the bouquet. My arm in your arms, breathing, breathing. ====================== looks like your vacation was good for your muse...lovely write poetess Lori-girl. |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
A lovely vintage, Bluesy... |
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Ratleader
since 2003-01-23
Posts 7026Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass |
Pretty, pretty....and no blues in it....I like that very much. Glad to see one from you -- I've been wondering when we'd get to see the next one! ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸ ¸¸ºº> ~~~(¸¸ER¸¸ºº> |
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Duncan Member Ascendant
since 2001-08-07
Posts 5455 |
"Winding around grapevines pruned and distilled with careful attention, a harvest without clinging labeled Cheyenna." Smiling at this one Bluesy...  |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Very, very beautiful, Lori. I especially like this ending... draping the landscape completes the bouquet. My arm in your arms, breathing, breathing. Hugs, sweet lady, Ethel |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
OH Lori, this is perfection and it dang sure is good to see your words again hon. Have missed you  |
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HopeS Member Elite
since 2000-12-22
Posts 4596Perth Western Australia |
Everything about this was beautiful , hey bluesy love that plateau you are on Hope |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
Save that cork for me bluesy....lol, just kidding. Great write -- I love it! ...jo |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
Thank you good poet friends. I appreciate it so much and aplogize for not being around lately. Real life is what it is, and I miss my time here. Hugs, and happy summer days to you~ |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
Like a fine wine dapples in gold draping the landscape completes the bouquet. My arm in your arms, breathing, breathing. Smiling at ya Ms Blues. Love this. Maree  The clouds never expect it when it rains, but the sea, changes colour, but the sea, does not change. |
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Kevo Member
since 2004-06-02
Posts 466Navarro County, Texas, USA |
I thought this was a beautiful poem, fluid, with great imagery, worthy of printed pages. Kevin |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
The significance of grapes and the vine weave wonder into innocense... Another great write. TD |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Nice....James |
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Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Lori Lovely positive flow to this, my friend. Good to see you! |
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Duncan Member Ascendant
since 2001-08-07
Posts 5455 |
Are we there yet??? |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
You paint very well Bluesy....I'm sorry I haven't given you many comments lately, for you always have deserved them...good ones.. always good ones.. |
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Sadelite Member Elite
since 2003-10-11
Posts 2519 |
Bluesy, It's great to read your poetry again-I've missed you. It sounds like the retreat has been refreshing. I'm happy for you. I'll be looking forward to our next visit. Sadelite |
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Ratleader
since 2003-01-23
Posts 7026Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass |
I think maybe we just keep this one on top for a while longer...that's where it belongs, and I always believe in posting a poem where it belongs....  ))!!BUMP!!(((~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸ ¸¸ºº> ~~~(¸¸ER¸¸ºº> ______________Ratleader______________ |
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