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Tequilia_Sunrise
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since 2003-02-19
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Lochalsh, Ontario, Canada

0 posted 2004-06-11 01:09 AM




If God would turn me into a granola bar
If He would make me a piece of sesame candy
Oh my... Wouldn't it be so right nice good and dandy?
To have your silken hands tear-off my cover
and both your hungry eyes inspect me all over
To have your thick rose lips caress my body
your sparkling ivory teeth devour me wholy
To be consumed in you and to give you happiness
Quell your hungers away fill-up your emptiness...
If God would turn me into a granola bar... a piece of sesame candy...
Oh my! Wouldn't it be so right nice good and neat
If I weren't the Fig Newton you wont eat
Cause you are on a diet?!


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JamesMichael
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1 posted 2004-06-11 01:13 AM


Sensual thoughts here...I love to eat fig newton's...watch out the Fig Newton Company is going to get you...James
iliana
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since 2003-12-05
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2 posted 2004-06-11 01:16 AM


Cute write, Tequilia_Sunrise.  It can be taken two ways, though, and I'm hoping I took it the right way.   ....jo
Susan
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walking the surreal
3 posted 2004-06-12 12:50 PM


Tee Hee -- I love the creativity of this.

Susan

The whole of the Universe resides within each individual heart.

Martie
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4 posted 2004-06-12 03:45 PM


Tequilla Sunrise

My kids used to tell me that it was okay to eat a Fig Newton...it was fruit.  I enjoyed this!

Tequilia_Sunrise
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Lochalsh, Ontario, Canada
5 posted 2004-07-05 02:32 AM


thankx everyone for your lovely comments
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