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0 posted 2004-06-10 01:52 PM


BIG HUNK


there’s a big HUNK
outside my patio window

a big HUNK
of sun!

It blew in-
in between the clouds
in between the rains

I can go mow
with the wind in tow

or
maybe I’ll be in the tow
of the wind
grin

©June 10, 2004

Whether on the shoal or on the shore,
I'll seek the lighthouse evermore.

© Copyright 2004 Virginia Salter - All Rights Reserved
Sunshine
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1 posted 2004-06-10 02:02 PM



Sudhir Iyer
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2 posted 2004-06-10 02:07 PM




regards
sudhir

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Member Rara Avis
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3 posted 2004-06-10 02:11 PM


I know, I know.  Today we have your rain and clouds.  Waiting for the hunk.  Love, Joyce
Ericc
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4 posted 2004-06-10 04:17 PM


Very creative...great write!

Eric

Susan
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5 posted 2004-06-10 05:17 PM


back atcha --

Susan

The whole of the Universe resides within each individual heart.

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