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Sudhir Iyer
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since 2000-04-26
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0 posted 2004-06-10 01:51 PM


-:-
have you seen celesta
and the great gig in the sky?

in mornings
when daffodils wake up
blinking eyelids
in quick multiplication
as honeydew butterflies,
spotted or otherwise
swim across sight
in impish slide

or did you miss celesta
and the great gig in the sky?

in late evenings
when clouds go home
leaving trees to salute
blinking diamonds
in united colours
that benetton might
strive to weave ~
to lace threads
of darting meteorites


-:-

well, I don’t know who celesta is
but, I’ve seen a gig or three.

right up there
very high
tell you what
my eyes
sigh


don't yours?

© Copyright 2004 Sudhir Iyer - All Rights Reserved
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Member Rara Avis
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1 posted 2004-06-10 01:56 PM


benetton

?help me out, what's that?

btw, I love to watch the gigs in the sky

Whether on the shoal or on the shore,
I'll seek the lighthouse evermore.

Sudhir Iyer
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2 posted 2004-06-10 02:04 PM


"United Colours of Benetton"

a manufacturer of clothing featuring a line of casual wear


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3 posted 2004-06-10 02:35 PM


tell you what
my eyes
sigh


Oh, this is wonderful Sudhir. Wonderful.
hugs, Chris

   Life itself is the most wonderful fairy tale.
                                          Hans Christian Anderson

iliana
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since 2003-12-05
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4 posted 2004-06-10 04:58 PM


my eyes sigh, too --- your poem.....made me giggle.
Sudhir Iyer
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Mumbai, India : now in Belgium
5 posted 2004-06-14 10:58 AM


Thanks a lot...

Regards
sudhir

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