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Soleil Noir
Senior Member

since 2001-12-19

Posts 688
USA

0 posted 2004-06-10 01:25 PM

He said,

             Stop asking why

then paused, for her fear was palpable
to possess the proposed thought
of that much possible,
potential, promising joy,

when he husked his heart,

                 Just know that I do.

And then he said,

                              You give me life,

and she flowered, whole again.

Joyce Johnson

Member Rara Avis

since 2001-03-10

Posts 9912
Washington State

1 posted 2004-06-10 01:29 PM

Lovely thoughts, penned exquisitely. Joyce

LeeJ
Member Patricius

since 2003-06-19

Posts 13296

2 posted 2004-06-10 01:30 PM

stunning and absolutely precious

Thank you for writing an sharing

Gentle Spirit
Member Patricius

since 2000-10-09

Posts 13989

3 posted 2004-06-10 02:00 PM

beautiful..

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

4 posted 2004-06-10 03:43 PM

Oh so lovely....
Hugs~

~Somewhere in my heart I'm always
Dancing with you in the summer rain~

iliana
Member Patricius

since 2003-12-05

Posts 13434
USA

5 posted 2004-06-10 04:56 PM

A beautiful unfolding, and I liked how you arranged the poem with the picture on the bottom.

Janet Marie
Member Laureate

since 2000-01-22

Posts 18554

6 posted 2004-06-10 08:26 PM

just like the poet....petaled perfection

James_A_Fraser
Senior Member

since 2003-09-03

Posts 972
Out Making Anticlines

7 posted 2004-06-10 09:59 PM

Yes...she did, didn't she?

~~J

Susan
Member Ascendant

since 2004-03-27

Posts 5104
walking the surreal

8 posted 2004-06-10 10:13 PM

Wow! Love this, it is exquisite.

Susan

The whole of the Universe resides within each individual heart.

Martie

Moderator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-09-21

Posts 28049
California

9 posted 2004-06-10 10:24 PM

You are so lovely!

[This message has been edited by Sunshine (06-11-2004 06:56 AM).]

Midnitesun

Member Empyrean

since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

10 posted 2004-06-10 11:25 PM

steavenr
Member Elite

since 2003-11-17

Posts 4058

11 posted 2004-06-11 12:18 PM

lovely thought...lovely write...very well done...enjoyed much...

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

12 posted 2004-06-11 01:01 AM

Nice...James

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