Tonight I shall let my hair fall

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Susan
Member Ascendant

since 2004-03-27

Posts 5104
walking the surreal

0 posted 2004-06-09 09:19 PM

Tonight I shall let my hair fall
Across forehead and shoulder bound
And I shall wear Red
Painted toes exposed
And my feet shall lead wherever they will
Constraints of “should” left behind
Laughter shall ring a little too loud
Just because
And merriment shall dance in my eyes
And my heart will leap in delight
At whatever silly thought it might
And I shall be Me
Carefree and Joyful
Playful and . . . Unspoiled
From worries and woe
For tonight I shall let my hair fall

S.A.T.

The whole of the Universe resides within each individual heart.

Larry C

Member Patricius

since 2001-09-10

Posts 10286
United States

1 posted 2004-06-09 09:20 PM

Susan,
Sounds like a perfect eveing! Nice write.

If tears could build a stairway and memories a lane, I'd walk right up to heaven and bring you home again.

Sadelite
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since 2003-10-11

Posts 2519

2 posted 2004-06-09 09:31 PM

Susan,
I liked your spirited poem; to let my hair fall--nice imagery! This is a fun one to be in tune with...You write well!

muted

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since 2004-01-15

Posts 2949
Elapsing, Eclipsing, Evolving

3 posted 2004-06-09 09:32 PM

ah,
see
sounds like a great plan

enjoyed this

Tequilia_Sunrise
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since 2003-02-19

Posts 612
Lochalsh, Ontario, Canada

4 posted 2004-06-09 10:02 PM

loved this

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

5 posted 2004-06-10 01:56 AM

and that's the way to live life!

jwesley
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-04-30

Posts 7563
Spring, Texas

6 posted 2004-06-10 02:44 AM

oh man . . . tonight I'd love to be there...

Loved this piece my friend . . . couldn't have written it any better than it is.

jwesley

iliana
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since 2003-12-05

Posts 13434
USA

7 posted 2004-06-10 02:48 AM

What a talent! What imagery! What a poem!

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

8 posted 2004-06-10 04:36 AM

Have fun...James

ThisDiamond
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since 2002-02-22

Posts 9353
Michigan, USA

9 posted 2004-06-10 11:14 AM

Enjoyed the carefree of this...perfectly fine you in gold.

TD

Susan
Member Ascendant

since 2004-03-27

Posts 5104
walking the surreal

10 posted 2004-06-10 02:13 PM

Thank you all, dear poet friends, for your replies. I do so appreciate their encouragement.

Susan

The whole of the Universe resides within each individual heart.

El_Campeador
Senior Member

since 2003-01-29

Posts 761
Ohio, USA

11 posted 2004-06-10 09:06 PM

May we learn to live every day "carefree and joyful"...
Thank you for sharing this.

“We are all travelers in the wilderness of this world, and the best that we can find in our travels is an honest friend.” –Robert Louis Stevenson

steavenr
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since 2003-11-17

Posts 4058

12 posted 2004-06-10 09:25 PM

well crafted write...we all need a litte..."Just because"...and we need it--just because...

inkedgoddess
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since 2002-11-19

Posts 7392
Ohio

13 posted 2004-06-10 10:49 PM

tonight i shall wear a dress sans panties....yes go for it, let your hair fall and be free!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Susan
Member Ascendant

since 2004-03-27

Posts 5104
walking the surreal

14 posted 2004-06-10 11:17 PM

Inkedgoddess, you've got the idea! Free those inhabitions LOL.

Susan

The whole of the Universe resides within each individual heart.

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