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In Passing |
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Corinne Member Ascendant
since 1999-10-28
Posts 5167state of confusion 
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It’s no use sleeping in former houses, still I dream in confluent horizons of family glue; when days were whipped gently and an ocean sang our lullabies; before we withdrew, split and spilt, three cracked stones strung across strands. All the clouds in the world whirl above us now, swirl with secrets that brushed young faces but eschew our aging ones. The sun is sharper. A harsh reflection spins skins spotted. [This message has been edited by Corinne (06-10-2004 09:29 PM).] |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
"All the clouds in the world whirl above us now, swirl with secrets that once brushed young faces but hover above our aging ones, where the sun shines with something darker, sharper, glints a harsh reflection and spins skin spotted." Wonderful wonderful write Corinne... Full of such beautiful vivid imagery. Very much enjoyed the read. Hugs~ ~Somewhere in my heart I'm always |
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Copperbell Senior Member
since 2003-11-08
Posts 956 |
me too. enjoyed |
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Susan Member Ascendant
since 2004-03-27
Posts 5104walking the surreal |
This is very poignant and full. A rich write. Hugs -- Susan The whole of the Universe resides within each individual heart. |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Corinne, I think I read this seven times... and I came across several revelations... foremost being... You are a Poet. |
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Marshalzu  
since 2001-02-15
Posts 2681Lurking |
Enjoyed  Andrew |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Corrine, you are such a talented writer. This is beautifully written, as is all your work.  |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
when days were whipped gently and an ocean sang our lullabies; before we withdrew, split and spilt, three cracked stones strung across strands. Just amazing imagery... I love this!! |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
I'm always left in awe when I read you Corinne. Just fabulous! Maree  into my library YOU go. The clouds never expect it when it rains, but the sea, changes colour, but the sea, does not change. |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
"All the clouds in the world whirl above us now, swirl with secrets that brushed young faces but eschew our aging ones. The sun is sharper. A harsh reflection spins skins spotted." Remembering.... here I go a wandering back to unravel secrets of my own....Corinne, this poem was haunting. Very stirring and lovely (though sad) penning. |
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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space |
a beautifully written ache Corinne |
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Kevo Member
since 2004-06-02
Posts 466Navarro County, Texas, USA |
Cinematic in scope. The pictures painted with your command of our language are beyond my own words. You are truly a gifted talent. I really enjoyed this poem. Thank you very much for allowing me to read it. Your poetic friend, Kevin |
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RobertB Senior Member
since 1999-09-26
Posts 1104Champaign, IL |
enjoyed the word play. play is good. play is fun. |
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Corinne Member Ascendant
since 1999-10-28
Posts 5167state of confusion |
Thank you ALL for being such wonderful friends! You are truly inspiring and generous souls! Corinne |
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