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Ericc
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0 posted 2004-06-09 02:22 PM



Even now...

Even as we step towards the
flame of our uncertainty.

There is always the promise of
ash.

And the faith we find in
fierce winds.

© Copyright 2004 Eric P McCarty - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2004-06-09 02:33 PM


Yes.... a quick stroke but deep...

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Sunshine
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2 posted 2004-06-09 02:36 PM


Some slash and dash, Eric...
leave 'em breathless...

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3 posted 2004-06-09 02:55 PM


I always love your formats and themes

great work!

Susan
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4 posted 2004-06-09 03:10 PM


Enjoyed -- Susan

The whole of the Universe resides within each individual heart.

iliana
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5 posted 2004-06-09 10:51 PM


even the promise of ash...... your words are haunting.  Another breathtaking penning.
Martie
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6 posted 2004-06-09 11:02 PM


Eric

To have burned is sometimes better.  Always enjoy your poems!

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7 posted 2004-06-09 11:32 PM


Hi Eric

You say so much with so few words.

Take care.....Sue

I am in motion
I am blue
Love is an ocean
I'm anchored in you
- Shawn Mullins

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8 posted 2004-06-10 12:09 PM


Yes

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9 posted 2004-06-10 01:55 AM


Eric~
This leaps in word-flames across the page~
Enchanting it is~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram <))><

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Janet Marie
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10 posted 2004-06-10 08:38 AM


There is always the promise of
ash.

And the faith we find in
fierce winds.

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good grief....are you sure youre not a moth??
awesome writing poet sir.

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11 posted 2004-06-10 08:39 AM


impressive writing!  I enjoyed this and am keeping it....
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Canada eh.
12 posted 2004-06-10 09:08 AM


Fantastic!!!  
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