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Open Poetry #32

Water

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Member Rara Avis

since 2000-11-16

Posts 7450
Oregon

0 posted 2004-06-09 10:33 AM

the rain
she comes, and comes, and comes
sating the land with drink
forcing worms to brink
crow flies
ferns tremble
in droplets wake
beads of life
cling to surfaces
defying gravity
for a time

©June 9, 2004

Whether on the shoal or on the shore,
I'll seek the lighthouse evermore.

LeeJ
Member Patricius

since 2003-06-19

Posts 13296

1 posted 2004-06-09 10:34 AM

Beautiful write

JL
Member Ascendant

since 2004-04-01

Posts 6128
Texas, USA

2 posted 2004-06-09 10:38 AM

Sounds and scenery of summertime. Great mental picture with this write.

JL

She said: ”You look cute in the dark.”

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

3 posted 2004-06-10 02:12 AM

how well described!

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