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Professor Gloom
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of Depression

0 posted 2004-06-09 08:51 AM


Fog below my feet
As I walk the high pathway,
Sunlight yet to greet
The valley with a new day.
No morning time tea,
A long walk yet before me
And many new things to see.

Gloom


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Seymour Tabin
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1 posted 2004-06-09 09:03 AM


Professor,
That sounds encouraging, enjoyed.

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Lurking
2 posted 2004-06-09 09:53 AM


Beautiful writing, thanks for sharing

Andrew

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3 posted 2004-06-09 10:01 AM


Professor,
  Very calming and beautiful writing; always a pleasure to read
              
   Sae

passing shadows
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displaced
4 posted 2004-06-09 02:51 PM


indeed!
iliana
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5 posted 2004-06-09 03:08 PM


I'm still watching ZZ.  Enjoyed!
Corinne
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state of confusion
6 posted 2004-06-09 05:43 PM


An interesting View, kind of magical. Wishing you could have your tea too, though!


Corinne

Tequilia_Sunrise
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7 posted 2004-06-09 06:08 PM


its goos that you can still be positive after not having your morning tea
Susan Caldwell
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8 posted 2004-06-22 11:48 AM




Wonderful!

(I would need some coffee first)

"cast me gently into the morning, for the night has been unkind"
~Sarah McLachlan~

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