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Open Poetry #32

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SimpleDiscourse
Member

since 2003-04-24

Posts 79

0 posted 2004-06-08 10:27 PM

Beneath midnight lights
In the city where
True and False
Collide

I was all but
Scrawled onto paper

If a song is sung
Would the purity of melody
Do nothing for me?

If the season doesn't ravage me,
Then you're my best bet
For I had just assumed
The warmth of
Skin barely touching
Would somehow be enough
To pull me from these
Waters where I am held
Beneath
The surface.

I was all but
Scrawled onto paper

And I can hear it
Playing on. . .

*Belabebeautiful*

Senior Member

since 2003-01-03

Posts 696
washington, USA

1 posted 2004-06-09 01:16 AM

wow...I really enjoyed this, I'm amazed it hasn't recieved a comment thus far. It was very touching, and I loved the very idea of being scrawled on paper...Beautiful words
~Live and Laugh~

The memories are worth the pain when the happiness is outweighs the sorrow
~Bella~

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

2 posted 2004-06-09 01:24 AM

nice one

iliana
Member Patricius

since 2003-12-05

Posts 13434
USA

3 posted 2004-06-09 02:23 AM

WOW -- great write!

muted

Member Elite

since 2004-01-15

Posts 2949
Elapsing, Eclipsing, Evolving

4 posted 2004-06-09 03:54 AM

"I was all but
Scrawled onto paper

And I can hear it
Playing on. . ."

i would love to tuck this little gem in my pocket and run away with it...you know, awesome lines...

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