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If love is red like roses
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If love is red like roses |
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Titia Geertman Member Ascendant
since 2001-05-07
Posts 5182Netherlands 
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 If love is red like roses with a purely whitened heart And spreads her wings like petals Then I will be a part Then I will be a part of you with all the thorns included And when somehow they make a scratch Then I will mend and glue it Then I will glue the parts again untill they're firm and strong When love is red like roses Then in my garden you belong Like scattered leaves...my words will flow |
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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
Nice Titia. Miss ya'! Hope mom is okay...  If tears could build a stairway and memories a lane, I'd walk right up to heaven and bring you home again. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Oh how lovely Titia! Love to see you posting more often. ~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~ ~Somewhere in my heart I'm always |
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Titia Geertman Member Ascendant
since 2001-05-07
Posts 5182Netherlands |
Thanks Larry, yes, Mom is okay and still driving her car around, 93 she will be this Summer and busy as ever. Nancy, thanks and though I'm retired now, I still seem to have too little time on hand. We will be having ADSL soon and that means I won't be on the telephone ticks anymore. For the moment however I still have to watch my bill LOL Titia Like scattered leaves...my words will flow |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Your garden is a special place That I would like to see. I'm sure the fragrances it has Would suit me wonderfully. The roses there grow strong and tall The tulips are divine. I swear that I can smell the ivy Climbing on the vine. So look and see if you have room. I hope that there will be A little space for you to place A pansy just like me   |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Enjoyed this lovely write...James |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
 beautiful! |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
Titia -- this was lovely, both the photo and the thought! .....jo |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
lovely write  regards sudhir |
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scorpio Member Ascendant
since 2002-10-02
Posts 5178right...there |
A colour poem and picture Titia. believe in what your heart feels... |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Framing this one, my friend... you've a true gift, and you share it so very, very well. |
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Pilgrimage Member Elite
since 2001-12-04
Posts 3945Texas, USA |
I love the picture your words present here, Titia. I think the structure of the poem adds a lot to its feel. Very nicely done. Nan (Pilgrim variety) |
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Sadelite Member Elite
since 2003-10-11
Posts 2519 |
titia, Absolutely beautiful! I enjoyed your poetic responses as well! |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
Then I will be a part of you with all the thorns included And when somehow they make a scratch Then I will mend and glue it Now isn't that the way we women always think, must be the nurturing side of us...smiles and hugs, what beauty woven through this image and your words. |
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JL Member Ascendant
since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128Texas, USA |
Stunning artistry. Enjoyed! JL She said: ”You look cute in the dark.” |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
always lovely pictures...to go with your words... M |
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Titia Geertman Member Ascendant
since 2001-05-07
Posts 5182Netherlands |
Balladeer, A pansy with the likes of you Will suit my garden fine It will bring colour to dark corners And makes me smile while sipping wine You know I would love to show you around Deer and fragrance? Yes, a taste of perfume is hanging in my garden. James, thank you dear. Passing Shadows, thanks also. Jo, glad my rhyming image gave you pleasure. Sudhir, thanks, we should meet some time. Scorpio, lots of coloured rhymes are hidden in my garden. Sunshine, I'll mail you soon and thanks for framing this one. Nan from Texas, thanks I enjoyed your little witty poems back in Tampa. Sadelite, thanks and you're welcome. LeeJ, alas, I'm not the nurturing type, or...?  JL, thanks Maureen, thanks sweet friend. Titia Like scattered leaves...my words will flow |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
OhTitia~ Wow ! I've said it before ... and now I repeat NO ONE ... BUT NO ONE ELSE Showcases photos so sweet~ Love you and miss the heck out of you~ The night-train whistles always bring you back to my memory~  *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost, |
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