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0 posted 2004-06-08 02:32 PM







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summer is callin'
whistling through a warm wind
sun sheds it's thermals
releasing holiday flames
that lick off my suntan oil

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Chris Barker
June 2004
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2 posted 2004-06-08 02:42 PM


smiles....yes, agree with Sunshine...very hot young lady...smiles and hugs
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3 posted 2004-06-08 02:42 PM


Oh yeah.... but cool too!

JL

She said: ”You look cute in the dark.”


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4 posted 2004-06-08 02:45 PM


I had to come back, Question, is that Jayne Wyman per chance  in the photo?


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5 posted 2004-06-08 03:20 PM


yep, a touch of summer's sizzle

Whether on the shoal or on the shore,
I'll seek the lighthouse evermore.

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6 posted 2004-06-08 03:24 PM


What a title... what a write... perfectly suited...

regards
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7 posted 2004-06-08 03:35 PM


Haha!!!  Ya know I love this summer sizzler Chris!
Hey!  It looks like Mom! Awwwww!
Get in outta that sun girl..
or stay in the puppy pool!
~Hugs & love ya, Teed~

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8 posted 2004-06-08 03:54 PM


Thankyou all so much.

Lee - I don't know if it is Jane Wyman or not...the photo didn't say. But you're right...it does look like her.


Nancy Lee - hugs to you sister of mine. I didn't have my glasses on and thought that you were telling me to stay out of the "puppy poo" Yuck!! LOL.

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9 posted 2004-06-08 04:00 PM


ahahahaha, I've got my glasses on, Chris, and still
thought that Nancy Lee told you to stay in the puppy poo....ahahahahaha

Ya'll are so cute, just like this poem is, Chris.
Hugs to you,
Ethel

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10 posted 2004-06-08 04:07 PM


Yes, H O T !  .......jo
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Ahahaaaa!!!  Sorry Chris....I had my glasses on...
but they're sliding right off my face it's so hawt!
I should have put a space between the l and the !



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Well, stay out of the poo anyway!
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13 posted 2004-06-08 04:19 PM


ahahaha that's okay, Nancy.
I did a doubletake and saw that you said "pool"  LOL

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14 posted 2004-06-08 04:20 PM


great poetry Chris - loved it - Paul
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15 posted 2004-06-08 07:28 PM


Awww...you are all so great.
Thanks for the laughs today.
My poetry wasn't supposed to affect the funny bone....but I guess that's a good thing. Ha ha haaaaaa.....whew...still so hot. Why, I'm so dry I'm spittin' cotton!

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16 posted 2004-06-09 12:55 PM


It's summertime, summertime, sum, sum, summertime, its summertime...James
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17 posted 2004-06-09 01:31 AM


very cool write
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18 posted 2004-06-09 12:12 PM


Many thanks James and Dixie! Hugs!
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19 posted 2004-06-09 10:37 PM


ah, this a unique look at it
enjoyed this!

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20 posted 2004-06-09 11:13 PM


Thankyou muted for reading and commenting.

   Life itself is the most wonderful fairy tale.
                                          Hans Christian Anderson

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21 posted 2004-06-10 07:54 AM


wow Chris, enjoyed this one much!
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22 posted 2004-06-10 10:22 AM


Hello Donna!  Thankyou my friend.
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23 posted 2004-06-10 03:50 PM


nicely done

The wonder of the world is gone I know for sure All the wonder that I want I found in her As a hole becomes a part that strikes a burn And no flame re

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24 posted 2004-06-10 04:40 PM


Thanks so much Snowflake !!

   Life itself is the most wonderful fairy tale.
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