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VAS
Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450
Oregon

0 posted 2004-06-08 02:28 PM



My Neighbor

He plops it down,
with firm decision
then looks around
with some derision.

There must be something
fun to do
somewhere between
the grass and you.

Aha, I’ll chew
upon my bum
then have a romp,
a tromp, a run.

As a pup
take liberties
hop about
chase my fleas.

Oh, yes, I’ll hop,
I’m not insane
my friends hop, too,
they are to blame.

You see they’re hares
all filled with glee
they show me how
a pet should be.

So I will hop
and leap up, too
and when I bark,
they quickly “Shoo!”

©June 8, 2004

Whether on the shoal or on the shore,
I'll seek the lighthouse evermore.

© Copyright 2004 Virginia Salter - All Rights Reserved
JL
Member Ascendant
since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128
Texas, USA
1 posted 2004-06-08 02:44 PM


HaaHaa!  Good one.  Silly visual.

JL

She said: ”You look cute in the dark.”


Susan
Member Ascendant
since 2004-03-27
Posts 5104
walking the surreal
2 posted 2004-06-08 03:12 PM


Ah yes, delightful.  Thanks for the smile--

Susan

The whole of the Universe resides within each individual heart.

Sudhir Iyer
Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943
Mumbai, India : now in Belgium
3 posted 2004-06-08 03:41 PM




regards
sudhir

Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113
Canada eh.
4 posted 2004-06-08 03:47 PM


Ah so cute Virginia!
Hugs~

~Somewhere in my heart I'm always
Dancing with you in the summer rain~

garysgirl
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since 2002-09-29
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Florida, USA
5 posted 2004-06-08 03:56 PM


LOL, this is so cute, Virginia.
I felt like I was hopping along. Ahahahha.
Hugs,
Ethel

iliana
Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434
USA
6 posted 2004-06-08 04:08 PM


VAS -- this was a delight!
passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26
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displaced
7 posted 2004-06-10 02:18 AM


that's cute
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