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Professor Gloom
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of Depression

0 posted 2004-06-08 01:56 PM


The blank before me
Hides the vast chaos beneath
Swirling stays unseen
So I curse under my breath
Come resolution
Fall not to untimely death
I can not rebuild
Arggh!
PRESS ANY KEY


Gloom


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Sunshine
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1 posted 2004-06-08 02:03 PM


GADS DO I KNOW THIS POEM....
AND I COULD HAVE WRITTEN IT TOO!


GG
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Lost in thought
2 posted 2004-06-08 02:06 PM


How about an ak-47 and a good backdrop instead?
Hammers just aren't safe enough!

Always, Alyssa

Poems are made by fools like me,
But only God can make a tree.
                  Joyce kilmer

Seymour Tabin
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Tamarac Fla
3 posted 2004-06-08 02:06 PM


Professor,
Good one, enjoyed.

JL
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Texas, USA
4 posted 2004-06-08 02:51 PM


To continue?

JL

She said: ”You look cute in the dark.”


iliana
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5 posted 2004-06-08 04:58 PM


I have to say, Professor, that I understand this all too well.  Excellent, excellent piece!
passing shadows
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displaced
6 posted 2004-06-10 02:14 AM


well done
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7 posted 2004-06-10 11:53 PM


Gack! A study in gloom itself, Gloom!

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Midnitesun
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Gaia
8 posted 2004-06-10 11:56 PM


oh no
just hit the esc key?

Susan Caldwell
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9 posted 2004-06-22 11:46 AM


LOL I keep the hammer far, far away.

"cast me gently into the morning, for the night has been unkind"
~Sarah McLachlan~

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