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Gentle Spirit
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0 posted 2004-06-08 01:39 PM


Darkness overcomes
the light no longer shines through.
Dreams and hopes fading......

It's better than I could have planned..
it's made me who I am...
{Trace Adkins}

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Professor Gloom
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of Depression
1 posted 2004-06-08 02:00 PM


Naturally dark,
Who needs such glaring brightness,
Dreams come to sleepers

Gloom

Sunshine
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2 posted 2004-06-08 02:00 PM



Though temporary,
Light will dawn on me again;
Hope will sing once more

LeeJ
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3 posted 2004-06-08 02:01 PM


I agree, dreams come to those unaware and unexpecting...beautiful
Gentle Spirit
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4 posted 2004-06-08 02:17 PM


thanks.
JL
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5 posted 2004-06-08 02:56 PM


I hate when that happens!

JL


She said: ”You look cute in the dark.”


iliana
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6 posted 2004-06-08 04:41 PM


Well said.  Wishing you both dreams and light.  
Enchantress
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Canada eh.
7 posted 2004-06-08 04:42 PM


Beautiful sweet lady....love will shine through.
~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~

~Somewhere in my heart I'm always
Dancing with you in the summer rain~

garysgirl
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8 posted 2004-06-09 02:06 PM


If we will hold on
The darkness will have to leave
Light will overcome

Love and heart hugs to you, sweet lady,
Ethel

I like your picture

passing shadows
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9 posted 2004-06-10 02:09 AM


yep...sometimes it's that way
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