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vandana
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0 posted 2004-06-08 11:10 AM



My love,
Sweet love,
My love for you,
Is like a dream coming trye,
My love for you is real,
Any deal that pays,
Sun rays,
My love for you,
Sun rays on my life,
And my love for you,
Is like a rose dew drops,
Sun racing light,
Because your love so sweet,
My love for you,
Is a every song
That makes my heart crazy,
Morning rays into my love,
My love for you,
Is a dream to me,
for you,
My love,
My love for you,
is enough for me to know,
your love is like a morning light,
That shines my dreams away,
My love for you,

© Copyright 2004 vandana - All Rights Reserved
Sudhir Iyer
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1 posted 2004-06-08 11:30 AM


like a morning light,
That shines my dreams away

... a very nice image indeed, as is the rest of it...

regards
sudhir

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2 posted 2004-06-08 12:36 PM


this is precious...and you know I don't like mushy love poems
garysgirl
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3 posted 2004-06-08 12:42 PM


Vandana, this is really pretty.
I love it.


JL
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4 posted 2004-06-08 03:39 PM


A beautiful love song indeed!

JL

She said: ”You look cute in the dark.”


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5 posted 2004-06-08 03:46 PM


Very lovely Vandana....I have missed you!!
Hugs~

~Somewhere in my heart I'm always
Dancing with you in the summer rain~

iliana
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6 posted 2004-06-08 04:39 PM


"My love for you,
is enough for me to know,
your love is like a morning light,
That shines my dreams away,
My love for you,"

Very sweet poem, Vandana.....loved this part.  

JamesMichael
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7 posted 2004-06-09 01:14 AM


Nice writing vandana...James
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8 posted 2004-06-09 01:40 AM


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9 posted 2004-06-09 03:56 AM


so nice to see you here...especially sharing all that love with us!
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