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wordwizard
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on the way to next world

0 posted 2004-06-08 12:10 PM



Is this something you lean on
family allowance to look upon
support relieves nurses in a hospital tent
where's the auxiliary medic who came and went?


Support is closer to you than you think
optician's chart that has eyes blink;
in the way that families get a monthly stipend
space crews get fuel loads on which to depend.

Does it come from some heavely source up above
foreshadowed by morning visits of a ringed white dove?
Or does this depend on the sweat of my brow
the earnings I make and the expenses to allow.


Something to lean on for support
verbiage for an argued retort,
dependance relies on help that arrives
independence gives us the will to survive.


© Copyright 2004 ecrivan



© Copyright 2004 Martin Dansky - All Rights Reserved
Sunshine
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1 posted 2004-06-08 08:36 AM


Martin...thank you.
My mind went hither and yon
and back again
on this one...

nakdthoughts
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2 posted 2004-06-08 11:30 AM


independence gives us the will to survive, so true Martin...

M

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