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It's Raining.
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It's Raining. |
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exhale Senior Member
since 2003-06-13
Posts 646Alberta,Canada 
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it's raining and you're not here your mind wanders to good times good friends good beer.. am i figment of your drunken imagination? i say the alcohal is effecting you you say i;m crazy you stumble home one night 2:38am it was raining and i wasn't there my mind had wandered, to better times my beaten body ached as i climbed out of bed to fix your dinner while having negelected mine.. i said the alcohal is effecting you, you answer with your fist.. -side note- don't worry this poem isn't about me,i've known waaaayy to many people of which this is a reality to,and that just wrong. |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Well, I sure am glad it isn't happening to you, just wish it wasn't a reality for anyone else either. A thoughtful write, m'friend. |
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Susan Member Ascendant
since 2004-03-27
Posts 5104walking the surreal |
Ouch. It is painful, this, to think that some live in such a manner. The pain of such an existance is evident in this write. Susan The whole of the Universe resides within each individual heart. |
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GG Member Elite
since 2002-12-03
Posts 3532Lost in thought |
Midnitesun stole my words before I even got a chance to have them  I hope that from seeing this poem, some people realise more of the reality of these situations. And then they do something about it... Always, Alyssa Poems are made by fools like me, |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
I used to be one of them....thank God I got out thank you for this write |
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