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Marge Tindal
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0 posted 2004-06-07 02:13 PM



Beyond All Love
~*Marge Tindal*~


Beyond all love, I have held you
in treasured moments of this heart
Walked with you, talked with you
whether together … or apart~

I have held you in the tender
as twi-of-night purpled in soft come
Stroked your brow with gentle kisses
as the day became undone~

Caressed you in the velvet of night
while the stars watched in amaze
As you returned the love
more abundant than what I gave~

I have loved you with a fervor
that glistened on my skin
knowing … growing
a beginning that has no end~


Foreverly circles us back
to the place we will always be
Me loving you … You loving me~



~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram <))><

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1 posted 2004-06-07 02:17 PM


~ and may it always be...

Loverly, loverly, loverly!

Lovin' hugs,
EO

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2 posted 2004-06-07 03:32 PM


Beyond all love, I have held you
in treasured moments of this heart
Walked with you, talked with you
whether together … or apart~

Oh, lady... this is so lovely. *S* And yes... I know all about those conversations of heart... they're vital to survival when distance is an enemy. *S*

Beautiful work!!

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3 posted 2004-06-07 03:34 PM


"Foreverly circles us back
to the place we will always be
Me loving you … You loving me~"

So very loverly Margie gal!
~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~

~Somewhere in my heart I'm always
Dancing with you in the summer rain~

Seymour Tabin
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4 posted 2004-06-07 06:14 PM


Marge,
Lovely.

Bonnie j
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5 posted 2004-06-07 06:17 PM


Loverly my friend.
Hugs a comin your way.
BonBon

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6 posted 2004-06-07 06:22 PM


BRAVO!!!! I absolutely love it...The perfect circle is love...
JamesMichael
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7 posted 2004-06-07 07:02 PM


One of my favorites...silky...James
Martie
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8 posted 2004-06-07 11:06 PM


Marge/sis

I love how your words love!  

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9 posted 2004-06-07 11:35 PM


Such happiness is a treasure few know...
This write seemed holy somehow.
TD

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10 posted 2004-06-07 11:55 PM



Thank you all for letting me share with you the tenderness of my heart~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram <))><

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11 posted 2004-06-08 12:13 PM


Dear Marge:  This is exquisite!  How wonderful to have your love returned, as it is!

Love
Betty Lou

Betty Lou Hebert

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12 posted 2004-06-08 12:37 PM


enjoy!
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13 posted 2004-06-08 02:05 AM


"Caressed you in the velvet of night
while the stars watched in amaze
As you returned the love
more abundant than what I gave~"

Yes -- beyond all love!  Really enjoyed this, sweet Marge!   ....jo


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in awe at you
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15 posted 2004-06-08 06:24 AM


it is wonderful to be loved like that, Marge


M

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16 posted 2004-06-08 06:46 AM


Beyond all love, I have held you
in treasured moments of this heart
Walked with you, talked with you
whether together … or apart~


Beautifully written and expressed Margie
My best for a fabulous day


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17 posted 2004-06-08 02:05 PM


Wonderful ~~~*Marge*~~~
It is true
You Love me and I love You
Huglet's Muys

[This message has been edited by Muys (06-08-2004 08:04 PM).]

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18 posted 2004-06-08 02:53 PM


Soooooo nice!

JL

She said: ”You look cute in the dark.”


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19 posted 2004-06-08 03:25 PM


very lurvly indeed

regards
sudhir

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20 posted 2004-06-08 07:08 PM


Marge, this is the most beautiful love poem. I was going to quote my favorite part, but it wopuld have been the whole poem. It all is the way my Honey and I feel about each other, too. It is special to have this kind of love in your life, isn't it? Thanks for sharing your heart with us.
Hugs,
Ethel

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21 posted 2004-06-08 08:11 PM



~Me loving you … You loving me~

I know that, sister to my heart, but this poem wasn't about me, now was it.
Say hello to Bill and tell him that I said that he's a darn lucky fellow. And that I'm still looking for that elephant

Titia


Like scattered leaves...my words will flow

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22 posted 2004-06-10 12:21 PM


Such beautiful words of love, Marge.

Take care........Sue

I am in motion
I am blue
Love is an ocean
I'm anchored in you
- Shawn Mullins

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23 posted 2004-06-10 05:07 AM


Fabulous...love it...James
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24 posted 2004-06-10 06:59 AM


Hiya and Good Morning, very lovely write, have a great day
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25 posted 2004-06-10 07:52 AM


breathtaking Marge.  Perfection as usual hon!
Marge Tindal
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Again, I thank EACH of you for your lovely replies to this little write~

Muys & Titia ...
LOVE YOU BOTH SO DEARLY~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram <))><

noles1@totcon.com

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27 posted 2004-06-11 08:53 PM


Beautiful Marge.
Love ya,
Betty

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28 posted 2004-06-11 08:59 PM


Very beautifully and tenderly expressed, Marge!
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29 posted 2004-06-13 10:24 AM


love how you write romance
Marge Tindal
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30 posted 2004-06-30 01:36 PM


Thanks gals~
And the neatest thing is that my fella just loves it too~

I appreciate the sweet replies~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram <))><

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31 posted 2004-07-02 12:19 PM


Marge...This has got to be one of the best if not the best poem of yours I have read.
It is sure to touch many hearts in a special way...Paul

~~To share my poems with you is to share my heart with you~~
Paul

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32 posted 2004-07-02 02:20 PM


*smiling*
simply beautiful

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33 posted 2004-07-02 02:32 PM


An awful lot of heart,  of feelings and of
love within this poem.  Much enjoyed, Marge.

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34 posted 2004-07-08 04:27 PM



Smiling broadly here ... thank you dear people for your responses~

Paul~
That is such a nice reply ... thanking you twice~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram <))><

noles1@totcon.com

Marge Tindal
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35 posted 2004-07-18 06:56 PM



Just 'on accounta'~
Some days are real special~
Love you, Bill~
*Huglets*
~*Me*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram <))><

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36 posted 2006-09-12 10:05 PM


I needed to read this tonight.

~Sending heart hugs your way dear lady~

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37 posted 2007-10-29 02:23 PM


re- read this over and over

ARCTIC WIND

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