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Ericc
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0 posted 2004-06-10 04:25 PM



"This is our path..." Your fingers say as
they trace their language to my
flesh.

And my bones tremble in reply.

As if they know our final
destination.


© Copyright 2004 Eric P McCarty - All Rights Reserved
gemjop
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1 posted 2004-06-10 04:28 PM


You get better, and better.

~
as
they trace their language to my
flesh.
~

Perfection.


Sunshine
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Listening to every heart
2 posted 2004-06-10 04:30 PM


Oh, they know...
Enchantress
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Canada eh.
3 posted 2004-06-10 06:26 PM


Oh my...how softly sensual...
Love this one Eric!

Susan
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walking the surreal
4 posted 2004-06-10 07:29 PM


Mmm, mmm, I really like this one, whew!

Susan

The whole of the Universe resides within each individual heart.

Sadelite
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5 posted 2004-06-10 10:30 PM


This is our path..." Your fingers say as
they trace their language to my
flesh.

I agree. PERFECTION!  What an inspiration must have!
             Sadelite

Jaime Fradera
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6 posted 2004-06-10 10:36 PM


Jaime traces the path of your words in Braille on his computer and wxplores the outlines of your spirit with his heart.

ThisDiamond
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7 posted 2004-06-10 10:37 PM


A journey worth taking.
Wonderful expressions...
TD

suthern
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8 posted 2004-06-11 03:12 PM


Oh, yes... *wistful sigh*
vandana
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9 posted 2004-06-11 05:08 PM


enjoyed
iliana
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10 posted 2004-06-11 06:23 PM


Yep.....I'm convinced.....when you publish that book of verse, which I hope you do someday, be sure to let us know!  Another lovely!     ....jo
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11 posted 2004-06-12 04:41 PM


Oh well, that gave me a little tingle up my spine..
Sandra

Suetang
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12 posted 2004-06-14 10:23 PM


Wow, Eric!

I'm speechless!

Take care.........Sue

I am in motion
I am blue
Love is an ocean
I'm anchored in you
- Shawn Mullins

ThisDiamond
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13 posted 2004-06-14 10:27 PM


Eric...
It's like you have an uncanny ability to read my mind sometimes.
Worth reading over and over.
TD

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