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Sunshine
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0 posted 2004-06-06 04:38 PM




Verde, Verdant

I dream
in green now,
though life and love, lust and liberty
color my world;

I dream in green.

All colors surround me,
I wear black
to define edges;
but I
dream in green;

under blue, over rose, highlights
of white in display of ray;
sun-glints in pray;
life time’s array;
earth toned in way of play,
yes,

I

dream in green…

with an underlining line
skipping rope,
in
hope.

I dream green.




Karilea - if I whisper, will you listen?  Keeping in mind, I must stand close...

© Copyright 2004 Karilea Rilling Jungel - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2004-06-06 05:31 PM


green is my fav colour

you dream beautifully in green sunshinygirl.

Maree

The clouds never expect it when it rains, but the sea, changes colour, but the sea, does not change.
~Stevie Nicks~

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2 posted 2004-06-06 06:41 PM


I can't say if I dream in color or not...don't really know

good write here

Enchantress
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3 posted 2004-06-06 07:31 PM


I dream in color also...but not all green..
although I do love green so much..
Lovely write Sunshine!
Hugs~

~Somewhere in my heart I'm always
Dancing with you in the summer rain~

kayjay
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4 posted 2004-06-06 09:10 PM


Perhaps you're going to win the lottery?  Nice job!  KJ

Through rubble and trouble and dark of night
The yawn of a dawn will hasten the light

Tequilia_Sunrise
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5 posted 2004-06-07 04:02 AM


Intresting thoughts

THANK-YOU

Tequilia

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6 posted 2004-06-08 09:03 AM


This poem.....

It's my fifth visit and I still don't know what to say. This poem affected me....down inside, where it counts. So ardent, so intense, so vulnerable, so honest, so hopeful....there aren't enough so's....

Occasionally I print out a poem and lay it on the desk in front of my computer screen for a week or so....then I can read it any time I feel the need...this will be one of them.

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Sudhir Iyer
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7 posted 2004-06-08 09:17 AM


am green with envy now...

regards
sudhir

JL
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8 posted 2004-06-08 04:23 PM


Green is good!  Enjoyed...

JL

She said: ”You look cute in the dark.”


iliana
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9 posted 2004-06-08 04:31 PM


I agree, Green is good.  Sunshine, this was the uplift that I needed today.  Thanks you for the color.  
El_Campeador
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10 posted 2004-06-09 05:18 PM


I always like color poems. Thank you for sharing this, Karilea...

“We are all travelers in the wilderness of this world, and the best that we can find in our travels is an honest friend.” –Robert Louis Stevenson

Corinne
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11 posted 2004-06-09 05:41 PM


A lush, full color in which to dream, Karilea! Loverly!


Corinne

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12 posted 2004-06-10 04:13 PM


a keeper.

to me this whispered, independence, movement and of course, growth.

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13 posted 2004-06-10 05:30 PM



bernie

A smile a day keeps the world in smile's.
Bernie Slicker

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