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Tequilia_Sunrise
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0 posted 2004-06-06 02:39 PM




Indelible strokes of wonder
Across a painted sky:
A sight so rare, these lights aflight
Tilt hovering wings of lore
O'er sleeping bedrock towns,
Filling wizendest of eyes
And aching, faded hopes;
Time they can but dare, and
Echo-sail by dreams,
In far-flung alien winds,
Here with stealing themes...

© Copyright 2004 Amanda Seymour - All Rights Reserved
Greeneyes7
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1 posted 2004-06-07 05:57 PM


Very nice.  I like the flow!
Tequilia_Sunrise
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2 posted 2004-07-05 02:34 AM


thankx everyone for your lovely comments
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3 posted 2004-07-05 07:56 AM


Amanda~
This is truly a lovely piece~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram <))><

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4 posted 2004-07-05 02:19 PM


Captures the imagination! So many mysteries yet to be unfolded...  


EA

Tequilia_Sunrise
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5 posted 2004-07-05 04:40 PM


Thank-you so much
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6 posted 2004-07-05 07:24 PM


I can't say that there is "life out there", but if there isn't I'd have to agree with Jody Foster's character in the film "Contact" - "It would be an awful waste of space!

Great Piece, TS

passing shadows
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7 posted 2004-07-06 12:56 PM


good write here
enjoyed the thoughts this afternoon

Artic Wind
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8 posted 2007-11-11 12:56 PM


Enjoyed


ARCTIC WIND

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