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Seymour Tabin
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0 posted 2004-06-06 07:21 AM


Counter Balance

Seems counter balance runs the clock
Not true my friend does that seem strange?
The very tic against the tock
Locked in power that’s the change

It only looks like it’s in rhyme
Illusion makes profundity
Against the short and length of time
Confusion seems eternity

We live within dimensions core
Within our soups osmotic cook
It is the nature of the store          
And delusion of the book

Be happy with the fairy tail
Do not burst the bubbles wall
It is the home of rainbows trail
Stay the echo of its call

Sail your ship in melting time
You’re the smelting of the prime.



© Copyright 2004 Seymour Tabin - All Rights Reserved
Kethry
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1 posted 2004-06-06 08:10 AM


Seymour, how can I say anything that has not been said before. Your sense of rhythm and rhyme always fills me with awe.

Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind.  Unknown



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2 posted 2004-06-06 09:34 AM


Agreeing with Kethry here. Awesome write Seymour! Have a lovely Sunday. hugs, Chris

   Life itself is the most wonderful fairy tale.
                                          Hans Christian Anderson

ethome
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3 posted 2004-06-06 09:39 AM


Oh, I love that third verse......Very much a Sy write....You know...Sy-fi the good stuff!


Have a good day..
Eric

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4 posted 2004-06-06 09:41 AM


Wonderful morning write Sy!
Much enjoyed the read.
~Morning hugs, Nancy~

~Somewhere in my heart I'm always
Dancing with you in the summer rain~

Sunshine
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5 posted 2004-06-06 10:09 AM


So much has happened this last week,
waving emotions against a rocky shore...
that this particular poem
deserves a place in the library...

Earth Angel
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6 posted 2004-06-06 10:24 AM


Good morning! Good morning!

You be an alchemist! ~ for thy prime smelted ore is pure gold!

Happy rainbow trails!
EA

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7 posted 2004-06-06 12:28 PM


Be happy with the fairy tail
Do not burst the bubbles wall
It is the home of rainbows trail
Stay the echo of its call


Yep, wise words, my friend. Thanks, Seymour.
Are you having a good weekend? I hope so.
Hugs  
Ethel

passing shadows
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8 posted 2004-06-06 12:54 PM


neat write
Kevo
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9 posted 2004-06-06 09:30 PM


I stand in awe.  What a spectacular poem.  Your writing is well constructed.  There is some refreshing imagery in there and I found it thororoughly original and refreshing.  I am so glad I stopped to read it.

Kevin

iliana
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10 posted 2004-06-08 03:02 AM


  That I will try to do, sir.  .....jo
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