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Dust Particles |
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Tequilia_Sunrise Senior Member
since 2003-02-19
Posts 612Lochalsh, Ontario, Canada 
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A multitude of colors flash before my eyes, and I see myself soaring high above this sickened earth into billowed clouds. My dreams are bitter sweet and the trees keep me company. I am the bird who has yet to fly, I want freedom to! To see the sky, to sit on a mountian top and count falling stars, to be alone and wonder about this vast univerise that holds us in its claws, as though we are the only crumb of what it actually beholds. Dust particles... Each of us think, and look for our own purpose in life. We seek all beauties of life, but find ourselves sunk into the blackness of the univerise |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
Good write. I like to think of us as golden stardust particles, tho.  |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
wonderful thought here |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
And some find the beauty...James |
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Startime55 Member Elite
since 2003-04-05
Posts 2148Alberta, Canada |
And then with words you paint visions of beauty...We are lost to our dreams which surround us as we listen to the songs of birds in their freedom...Well done... |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Love this one...very very nicely penned. Hugs~ ~Somewhere in my heart I'm always |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
Very nicely written, my friend...really enjoyed reading this...you express yourself well. jwesley |
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steavenr Member Elite
since 2003-11-17
Posts 4058 |
ahhhh, but 'tis given to the adventurous to break the bonds of earth's grasp and fly off to worlds yet unreached, unimagined and for some unsought...your poetry was beautiful...now I bid thee...soar.... |
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Tequilia_Sunrise Senior Member
since 2003-02-19
Posts 612Lochalsh, Ontario, Canada |
thank you for the lovely replies |
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Tequilia_Sunrise Senior Member
since 2003-02-19
Posts 612Lochalsh, Ontario, Canada |
thankx everyone for your lovely comments  |
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