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JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16
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Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

0 posted 2004-06-06 12:53 PM


Blue River

Blue river
flowing round the bend.
Blue river,
the place where
new friendships begin.
I met her on the
banks of blue river.
I never imagined that
she wanted to be my friend.
Then blue river flowed
through our thoughts,
our hearts, and released
a friendship from
from deep within.

JamesLee
June04
2004

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iliana
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since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434
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1 posted 2004-06-06 01:20 AM


JamesLee, this was so good and I liked your play on words here.  I would venture a guess that many friendships have been formed here on the Blue River.   ....jo
passing shadows
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2 posted 2004-06-06 03:22 AM


beautiful
JamesMichael
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3 posted 2004-06-07 06:29 PM


Thank you iliana and passing shadows for the nice response...James
Tequilia_Sunrise
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since 2003-02-19
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Lochalsh, Ontario, Canada
4 posted 2004-06-08 08:12 PM


friendship is very beautiful, and women would be very lucky to have you as a friend
JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16
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5 posted 2004-06-09 12:52 PM


Thank you Tequilia...yes friendships are valuable...most relationships should stop at a friendship...and be content...James
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