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RedStoneEB
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0 posted 2004-06-05 06:02 PM


Wrote it for this new novel im writing called deadly extraction Can't tell you what its about cos it will spoil it know what i mean anyway hope you enjoy the poem


Title:- Remember you

Remember you, Through different eyes
Finding truth where most lies hide
Walked through dreams, dreams of you
Places tread our memories; I’ve found you.

But memories fade within the light
And you’ll stay locked away inside
Till sleep plays her sweet lullaby
And dreams unfold in the dead of night.

Tears shall fall behind
Stay in reality absorb in the light
You don’t belong to me I belong to you
Can’t open my mind to something new.

© Copyright 2004 Lee Hepworth - All Rights Reserved
iliana
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since 2003-12-05
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1 posted 2004-06-05 06:36 PM


Enjoyed!  
Sadelite
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2 posted 2004-06-05 06:59 PM


Awwww...  a new novel you say?  Have you already published some?  Let me know.  

Nice poetry...it could fit many themes and reflections!  Thanking you,
                 Sadie

passing shadows
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3 posted 2004-06-06 04:33 AM



Michelle_loves_Mike
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4 posted 2004-06-06 08:09 AM


Nice write, good feelings from it, best of luck with your novel!

Michelle

I wish all could find the true happiness I have found,,in the eyes of Mike

Kethry
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5 posted 2004-06-06 08:43 AM


If this poem is an example of how the book will be it sounds like it will be something wonderful.

Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind.  Unknown



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