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Ericc
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0 posted 2004-06-05 02:11 PM



"What secrets do you whisper?"...you ask
as your fingers trace this question to
my lips.

I close my eyes...absorbed in the
fabric of your asking.

And you smile at the silence of
my answer.

© Copyright 2004 Eric P McCarty - All Rights Reserved
passing shadows
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1 posted 2004-06-05 02:30 PM


you say it best when you say nothing at all


Martie
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2 posted 2004-06-05 02:32 PM


Ericc

Such sweet cloth is woven within the love of wordlessness.

Seymour Tabin
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3 posted 2004-06-05 02:36 PM


Ericc
Sometimes, LOL

iliana
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4 posted 2004-06-05 02:56 PM


Eric - WOW, really lovely the words you've woven into the fabric here!   ...jo
Suetang
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5 posted 2004-06-05 06:11 PM


Hello Eric

You always weave a fine work of art with your talented pen.  

Take care........Sue

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6 posted 2004-06-05 06:14 PM


Eric, you have done it again.
My, oh my, you say a lot in a few words.
Hugs,  
Ethel

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7 posted 2004-06-05 06:22 PM


Eric,
   I was just getting ready to post one, debating whether to use "fabric" in its title!  Then I came to this beauty and I thought to myself, "Now THIS is fabric!"  Needles to say, I'm going to go with my other choice! (You are remarkable in knowing just how much to say in your poetry.  It is always perfection to my ears.)
                 Sadie
                

ThisDiamond
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8 posted 2004-06-05 11:14 PM


So true... Magical


wordwizard
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9 posted 2004-06-06 01:07 AM


silence is the best language, enjoyed


JamesMichael
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10 posted 2004-06-06 01:11 AM


Nice...James
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11 posted 2004-06-07 03:01 PM


Oh, yes... this is beautiful! *S* Thank you for reminding me of when silence is good. *S*
Sunshine
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12 posted 2004-06-07 03:06 PM


Oh, yes...
I swear you lace
your poems
with spider's silk...

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