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Snowflake From Hell
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My own little Icey Oblivion

0 posted 2004-06-10 03:57 PM


I was on the brink,
Felt my whole life begin to sink.
And then you came to me...
I was on the brink,
Couldn't even take a drink.
And then you spoke to me...
I was on the brink,
Lost my master link.
And then I found out I didn't
I was on the brink,
Felt my whole life begin to sink.
Then you told me you love me.
And now I'm on the brink,
The brink of being with you,
Because you love me,
And I love you.
I was on the brink...
Then you told me you love me.

The wonder of the world is gone I know for sure All the wonder that I want I found in her As a hole becomes a part that strikes a burn And no flame re

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Copperbell
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Gaia
2 posted 2004-06-10 11:23 PM


Now that's a brink I'll drink to!
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