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Un Baiser Vole
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Un Baiser Vole |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Un Baiser Vole (To Steal A Kiss) It was a delight when I stole a kiss last night. It was a delicious piece of cake. She didn't even put up a fight. She was sleeping on my guest bed. It was about two a.m. I got up for an early morning snack and her lips looked like they needed a friend. So I stole a kiss. Only problem is I had just eaten a piece of cake and she woke up the next morning with chocolate all over her lips. Incriminating evidence, but not necessarily evidence of an early morning kiss. I made up a story quick, "Don't you remember, you woke up hungry in the middle of the night so I offered you some chocolate cake, and you took a big bite." She said, "Wait, I don't even like chocolate cake, and what's that all over your lips. Wipe that chocolate off of your lips and get over here and give me another good morning kiss." JamesLee June3 2004 It was my girlfriends birthday and I bought her some chocolate cake. I made up the rest of the story... |
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Kevo Member
since 2004-06-02
Posts 466Navarro County, Texas, USA |
James, I enjoyed the read and laughed some. Your poem was well written and was very visual. You were BUSTED! Good story. Kevin |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
James --  Very cute and sweet, no pun intended!  .....jo |
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Sadelite Member Elite
since 2003-10-11
Posts 2519 |
James, This was creatively different and cute! Thanks for chuckles. Sadie |
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MGROVES
since 2004-02-01
Posts 3802california |
LMAO  this was great  |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
cute |
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