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Jaime Fradera
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Where no tyranny is tolerable

0 posted 2004-06-04 07:55 PM


Forty-one Cents

I’m with a platoon of soldiers

On a jungle-covered island

Somewhere in the Philippines.

Our assignment is to fire

Rocket-propelled artillery shells

Out over the ocean.

We know the Japanese

Will respond to this provocation,

And begin hiking through the forest

To the other side of the island

Well out of the way

Before the inevitable Japanese attack.

My wife and I

Are captured separately by the Japanese.

I ponder:  What a strange idea …

Me … … wife …

The Japanese are polite

And perform some kind of mystic zen or yoga,
Hippie tao zen sufi budhist tantra meditation mantra,

But the ritual, or whatever it is,

Is strange, bizarre,
Cartoonish and nonsensical.

My “wife” passes a note

To her Japanese guard.

Her Japanese guard passes the note

To my Japanese guard.

My Japanese guard

Then passes the note to me.

I open the note

And it contains forty-one cents.

Then the scene changes.

I’m watching public television.

It’s a documentary about wainright and Mc-Arthur,

The great carrier battles

Of the Pacific war …

Who needs forty-one cents?

Jaime

[This message has been edited by Balladeer (06-07-2004 08:06 PM).]

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Midnitesun
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Gaia
1 posted 2004-06-05 01:56 AM


JAIME! what were you eating for dinner? LOL, musta been something well-fermented.
I gotta say, that ending 'commie' line still bothers me (even understanding your sense of humor). Now the forty one cents makes sense...sort-of.

passing shadows
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displaced
2 posted 2004-06-05 03:07 AM


yeah
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