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Marge Tindal
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0 posted 2004-06-04 01:52 PM



Rapturous Dawn
~*Marge Tindal*~

There is a rapture on the lawn
that paints the beauty of rising dawn
Spreads her soft light in shaded hues
of sunny adornment with no sign of blues~


*Photo - Marge Tindal - 2004*

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram <))><

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© Copyright 2004 Marge Tindal - All Rights Reserved
Martie
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1 posted 2004-06-04 01:56 PM


Marge/sis

One of my favorite times of day, dawn.  It takes a special eye to see it so beautifully.


Sunshine
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2 posted 2004-06-04 02:11 PM


You do have a lovely backyard...
LeeJ
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3 posted 2004-06-04 02:21 PM


oh my goodness Margie, how tenderly beautiful...simply lovely, thank you for sharing.
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4 posted 2004-06-04 02:25 PM


Marge, you captured a rapturous dawn, indeed!
~ both poetically and photographically!

Have a glorious day, my friend!

Lovin' hugs,
The Earthy One

JL
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5 posted 2004-06-04 02:30 PM


Excellent poetic verse and view.

JL

She said: ”You look cute in the dark.”


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6 posted 2004-06-04 02:51 PM


that was nice to wake up to, serinity, georgous picture!


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7 posted 2004-06-04 03:17 PM


Oh my Marge...this is spectacular!
What a beautiful garden you have!
~love and hugs, Nancy~

~Somewhere in my heart I'm always
Dancing with you in the summer rain~

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8 posted 2004-06-04 05:47 PM


"with no signs of blues" -- Marge, I LOVE it!      ....jo
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9 posted 2004-06-04 10:11 PM


Dear Marge: Lovely!  It's a beautiful time of the day.

Love
Betty Lou

Betty Lou Hebert

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10 posted 2004-06-04 10:14 PM


You certainly called this one Marge . . . lovely write about a lovely time.

jwesley

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11 posted 2004-06-05 03:19 AM


I'm jealous! I want a lawn like that!

this is beautiful!

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12 posted 2004-06-05 09:17 AM


Two beautiful poems here....and they look alike, though one's a picture.

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Seymour Tabin
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13 posted 2004-06-05 09:19 AM


Marge,
What Earth Angel said. Hugs

Margherita
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14 posted 2004-06-05 11:52 AM


Enchanting, dear Marge. The picture and the words ..... Dawn is so incredibly inspiring always ...

I won't be able to be on Pip until July.

You are all in my heart and I will miss you ... but the reason is that I am very very busy preparing to become a grandmother! And I will soon go and stay with my daughter.

Sending much love.
Margherita

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15 posted 2004-06-07 10:53 PM


beautiful lawn to go with beautiful lines...and the font size was readable for tired, old eyes
Betty
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16 posted 2004-06-13 08:00 AM


Marge this is so pretty. Another beautiful picture from your yard.
Love ya,
Betty

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17 posted 2004-06-13 09:12 AM


..very melodic—a pleasure to read..


spiros


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18 posted 2004-06-13 12:06 PM


Ah Marge, I can always rely on you to spark a smile in my spirit.  Beautiful.

Susan

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19 posted 2004-06-13 12:27 PM


Marge, you always have such beautiful pictures.  Thanks for sharing them. Your words define dawn so sweetly.  ~K~
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20 posted 2004-06-14 03:35 AM



This brings back so many happy memories of a day spend in that gorgeous fairy tale garden, where I've met the Fairy Queen herself.

Hugs, Titia

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21 posted 2004-06-14 04:46 AM


Dawn will break very shortly
"With no sign of blues", my favorite line of this poem.
THank you
Liz

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22 posted 2004-06-14 10:05 PM


A moment captured & shared so beautifully...

lovely, Margie!

*hugs*
~Tier

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23 posted 2004-06-14 10:34 PM


This picture is as close to perfect as is possible...and you narrate the image expertly. Loved this.
TD

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24 posted 2004-06-14 10:40 PM


My galpal this is extraordinary. What a beautiful picture you've captured and your words, as always, fabulous.

Miss you lots. We move next week and we can't wait till this is over.

Hugs and loves, Marti

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25 posted 2004-06-15 03:18 AM


NIce writing...nice picture...I keep saying I'm going to get back into photography...we'll see....James
Marge Tindal
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26 posted 2004-06-15 12:00 PM



Thank you all so very much
For the tender of your word-touch
I love the light upon the lawn
On the acreage where I belong~

*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram <))><

noles1@totcon.com

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27 posted 2004-06-15 01:22 PM


This is absolutely stunning Marge ... your words capture this incredible image brilliantly ... and WHAT an image!  That is gorgeous!  Beautiful composition flowing right through, from one spirit to another.

Best wishes and hugs,
/Kit

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28 posted 2004-06-17 12:31 PM


Beautiful!!!!

HUGS,
Bridgette

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29 posted 2004-06-17 07:38 AM


Just beautiful Marge...downright LOVELY!
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30 posted 2004-06-17 02:55 PM


saw this popped up again, and it should, so I came back for another read, simply lovely!
Marge Tindal
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31 posted 2004-06-30 01:30 PM


Friends~
I soooooooooooo appreciate each of you~
It does this little heart good to share the beauty of my home-meadow with you~
I am at peace and loving each and every moment of life~
Thank you~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram <))><

noles1@totcon.com

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