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Earth Angel
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0 posted 2004-06-03 03:43 PM



+*+*+*+*+*+*+*+*+*+*+
The sands of time soon cease to fall,
When our loving hearts entwine,
And the world simply disappears,
As your essence blends with mine.

Within the circle of your arms,
I breathe the breath of you,
Filling me with warmth and life,
Until the morning dew.

I sigh the sigh of sweet completion,
With your loving and adore,
You take me to that special place,
Where time stands still once more.
+*+*+*+*+*+*+*+*+*+*+


[This message has been edited by Earth Angel (06-05-2004 06:05 PM).]

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Sudhir Iyer
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1 posted 2004-06-03 03:48 PM


very romantic... and a nice rhyme scheme...

regards
sudhir

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2 posted 2004-06-03 04:07 PM


This is just beautiful, my friend... as I knew it must be with such a title. *S*

Within the circle of your arms,
I breathe the breath of you,
Filling me with warmth and life,

I want to be there... yes! *S*

Marge Tindal
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3 posted 2004-06-03 05:36 PM


SweetEarthyOne~

*sighing* here~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram <))><

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jwesley
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4 posted 2004-06-03 10:36 PM


... loved the love in here...

jwesley

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5 posted 2004-06-03 11:15 PM


pERfect rhyme here EA,  well done, very
well done...

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6 posted 2004-06-03 11:18 PM


very peaceful write, thanks for sharing


steavenr
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7 posted 2004-06-04 12:46 PM


this is one of those writes where you expect to turn the card over and see Hallmark...and for me...that is a compliment...it was truly lovely...
wordwizard
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8 posted 2004-06-04 01:01 AM


lovely thoughts while one consumes himself/herself in the world of material wants and needs


passing shadows
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9 posted 2004-06-04 02:41 AM


sigh
iliana
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10 posted 2004-06-04 02:42 AM


Double sigh.   ....jo
Susan Caldwell
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11 posted 2004-06-04 07:17 AM


Linda this was so sweetly romantic.

  

"cast me gently into the morning, for the night has been unkind"
~Sarah McLachlan~

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