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steavenr
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0 posted 2004-06-02 04:29 PM


When verdant hopes their essence fills
The venerate minds of those with dreams,
And beckons valleys dim and rugged rills
Spring forth with life and wishful schemes,

The echoes of their promise o’erflows
The banks of pleasant vales and lofts
The heights of pallored walls to rose,
Colored with its ached-tint rays so soft

And touch the soul in sure awakening
Lifting the mind to exalted planes divine.


© Copyright 2004 Steaven R Snow - All Rights Reserved
iliana
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1 posted 2004-06-02 05:46 PM


Elevating and spirit filled, leaving me enchanted!     ....jo
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2 posted 2004-06-02 06:30 PM


Steaven~
Very pretty read~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram <))><

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3 posted 2004-06-02 06:33 PM


Very nice indeed. Enjoyed.  Chris

   Life itself is the most wonderful fairy tale.
                                          Hans Christian Anderson

ThisDiamond
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4 posted 2004-06-02 11:08 PM


"And touch the soul in sure awakening
Lifting the mind to exalted planes divine"

Awesome!
TD

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5 posted 2004-06-03 12:04 PM


Beautifully expressed echoes of hope.

Read it three times with heightened appreciation with each subsequent read.


EA

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6 posted 2004-06-03 02:33 AM


awesome!
A Romantic Heart
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7 posted 2004-06-05 04:49 AM


~Hope is the air we breath....without hope we die...we become hopeless!

I love this style of poetry~Geat poem!

~ARH

"The best and most beautiful things in the world cannot be seen or even touched.They must be felt with the heart."~Helen Keller (1880-1968)


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8 posted 2004-06-05 07:28 AM


Love the springing hope in this.  It leaps!
                Sadie

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9 posted 2004-06-05 07:43 AM


steavenr
Well done, enjoyed.

HopeS
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10 posted 2004-06-05 09:13 AM


beautifully expressed and so uplifting

Hope

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