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zenny
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since 2002-11-24
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0 posted 2004-06-02 03:02 PM


"When do you know you love someone?": a question many ask
but finding out the answer's the most difficult of tasks
It's just a heartfelt feeling which will surely cross your life
And when you feel and know it's there, you know the depth of life!

For me it's just the waking up and kiss him into morn
But also the huge missing, apart my heart it torns!
Yet that's too soon forgotten when I lay inside his arms
I'll keep this short and will just say I fell for all his charms!

I do know you will find this feel, yet time is still unknown
And when you will, the times of waiting are bygone!
Don't rush these things, be sure love's there for you
Make sure you share this feel with one who loves you, too





© Copyright 2004 Kelly Verbeeck - All Rights Reserved
LeeJ
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since 2003-06-19
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1 posted 2004-06-02 03:16 PM


lovely thoughtful write, and most definately true
Susan Caldwell
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since 2002-12-27
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Florida
2 posted 2004-06-02 03:58 PM


Very Sweet.

"cast me gently into the morning, for the night has been unkind"
~Sarah McLachlan~

iliana
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since 2003-12-05
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3 posted 2004-06-04 02:52 AM


Very nice, and very wise ending!   ...jo
passing shadows
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displaced
4 posted 2004-06-04 05:16 AM


this is precious...love the new pic!
JamesMichael
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5 posted 2004-06-05 01:00 AM


Like your thoughts on love...James
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