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Think of Me
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Think of Me |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio 
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Think of me, left bare, as the pinks and purples of the season dress the others, forsaken, i am the orphan that stands alone, ashamed; i feel your slap, as the currents of the bay rummage thru my nakedness, think of me, but have i merely painted you with heart, would you care to know how the rain hammers on my broken branches, or that i can still thrive as the birds seek me as respite for their weary flight? do you know when nighttime comes and i pretend to sleep, i am only waiting for the fallout of the heavens to ring me in ethereal glow, think of me, when you can no longer look away, may i play the martyr to your awakened soul? [This message has been edited by inkedgoddess (06-02-2004 08:19 PM).] |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
"i am only waiting for the fallout of the heavens to ring me in ethereal glow, think of me, when you can no longer look away, may i play the martyr to your awakened soul?" Wow...this ache goes way deep Michele.. Awesome write pretty lady~ ~Somewhere in my heart I'm always |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
 Yes!!! "cast me gently into the morning, for the night has been unkind" |
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Susan Member Ascendant
since 2004-03-27
Posts 5104walking the surreal |
i am only waiting for the fallout of the heavens to ring me in ethereal glow, Simply lovely.  SusanThe whole of the Universe resides within each individual heart. |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
I love how you weave images of nature thru' your writes, Goddessa Poetessa!  EA |
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steavenr Member Elite
since 2003-11-17
Posts 4058 |
"think of me, when you can no longer look away" there is such a magnetism to this line...great write...beautiful overall |
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gemjop Member Elite
since 2002-11-18
Posts 2587Pencilveinia, USA |
do you know when nighttime comes and i pretend to sleep, i am only waiting for the fallout of the heavens to ring me in ethereal glow, think of me, when you can no longer look away, For some reason, this made me so close to tears. and not in a sad way. It's so, so so beautiful. That's all I can say. |
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JL Member Ascendant
since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128Texas, USA |
You do have a way of making a point. This is so sad. Wonderful write. JL She said: ”You look cute in the dark.” |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
In its lovely and somewhat subtle way, this poem is extremely powerful....and glowing. ...jo |
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bklynboy Senior Member
since 2002-12-15
Posts 660florida |
always thinking of you |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
thanks for stopping by |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
sad in a way, yes |
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GG Member Elite
since 2002-12-03
Posts 3532Lost in thought |
For school once I had to do a report of "I am a...", once of the things I chose was a tree. But nothing I wrote for it could have turned out as beautiful as this. Painful, but perfect. Always, Alyssa Poems are made by fools like me, |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
thanks kids; yes those dear trees, how much they are put through in a lifetime |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
deep... and I see a great metaphor here regards sudhir |
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