The Dance of Love (Sonnet)

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CastleGuard
Senior Member

since 2003-04-30

Posts 760
Alberta, Canada

0 posted 2004-06-02 11:56 AM

The Dance of Love

Is this the love that burns as words will burn
Within each heart; for love so grown will seal
The heart in flame and will the same return;
And being sealed, it reaches to reveal
The dancer hidden in the shade of mask;
For in his hand her hand was given life
And in his words the life of love was task;
His words that danced with joy on edge of knife.
But the lovers’ music stopped, and await
The dancers for new song to now begin;
May sweeter song yet sing and charge the gate
Into the hearts had grown distant within:
For in this dance each song is new and pure
And holds the premise of the lovers’ cure.

CG

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

1 posted 2004-06-02 12:03 PM

very romantic...love the mood this sets

Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

2 posted 2004-06-02 01:16 PM

Very beautiful...soft and romantic.
Very nicely penned.
Hugs~

~Somewhere in my heart I'm always
Dancing with you in the summer rain~

Susan
Member Ascendant

since 2004-03-27

Posts 5104
walking the surreal

3 posted 2004-06-02 02:55 PM

Enjoyed this,

Susan

The whole of the Universe resides within each individual heart.

Dark Angel
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since 1999-08-04

Posts 10095

4 posted 2004-06-02 04:55 PM

Very very nice

Maree

The clouds never expect it when it rains, but the sea, changes colour, but the sea, does not change.
~Stevie Nicks~

Suetang
Member Ascendant

since 2001-03-07

Posts 5187
Melbourne, Australia

5 posted 2004-06-03 01:10 AM

CG

Yet another stunning piece of romance writing.

Take care.......Sue

I am in motion
I am blue
Love is an ocean
I'm anchored in you
- Shawn Mullins

iliana
Member Patricius

since 2003-12-05

Posts 13434
USA

6 posted 2004-06-03 02:52 AM

"For in this dance each song is new and pure
And holds the premise of the lovers’ cure."

Lovely sonnet!

....jo

A Romantic Heart
Member Ascendant

since 1999-09-03

Posts 5496
Forever In Your Heart

7 posted 2004-06-04 02:57 AM

Love is the balm to heal all wounds...

I need all the soothing rubs across my heart
I can get....LOL!

Is There a doctor of love in the castle? LOL!

~Thy Lady Fair

"The best and most beautiful things in the world cannot be seen or even touched.They must be felt with the heart."~Helen Keller (1880-1968)

"Love l

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