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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296
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Your significance fancy danced across my brow Searing logic crawling over broken glass Inclined to your bleeding tongue Sprawling lines pierced my cinnamon skin Emotions were orally accessible and driven You promised life like hundred dollar bills Licking every power dry Our summer was thick with cicadas Going places where tourists never ventured Leading the women in me into a hypnotic sauna I was lost for prayer, led by your metaphoric culture I would have signed any treaty, any passport Against capture and it’s inevitable change My face smiled portraits in the sky Collecting antique swinging arms History changed shape, opening myth And always your stories, waiting outside my door Was there any reason why we were inside the same fence? With the shaman Finally I finished my classroom assignment I am lucky, writing from you, the first text of my soul |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
"Leading the women in me into a hypnotic sauna I was lost for prayer, led by your metaphoric culture I would have signed any treaty, any passport Against capture and it’s inevitable change" Lee, this was an enthralling piece of artistry; totally captivating. You have a sensitive heart.....and mind!  ....jo |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
Jo stole my verse hehehe |
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Nightshade 
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
My face smiled portraits in the sky Oh, my goodness Lee, that line alone is awesome enough! Love this poem and it is going into my library! hugs, Chris Life itself is the most wonderful fairy tale. |
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JL Member Ascendant
since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128Texas, USA |
I agree, this is captivating. Very intriguing write. JL  She said: ”You look cute in the dark.” |
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