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dingusjr
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0 posted 2004-06-02 09:58 AM


Imagine the lawman
who flings open the passenger door.
Out tumbles the body of Bonnie
all of 4'11" and ninety pounds.

A beautiful and petit young girl
barely two years a killer.
He smells a light perfume
against the burning sting of gunpowder.
Her red dress coated in crimson.

© Copyright 2004 Larry W. Allen - All Rights Reserved
Sunshine
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1 posted 2004-06-02 09:59 AM



Dang Larry!
You've got to quit
staying gone!

More, please?

Dark Angel
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2 posted 2004-06-02 04:11 PM


Love this

"her red dress coated in crimson"

Great images.

Maree

The clouds never expect it when it rains, but the sea, changes colour, but the sea, does not change.
~Stevie Nicks~

scorpio
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right...there
3 posted 2004-06-02 04:18 PM


This speaks to all the senses.  

believe in what your heart feels...

iliana
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4 posted 2004-06-02 05:48 PM


  enjoying your writes on Bonnie & Clyde!  This one was gripping!   ....jo
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just out of reach
5 posted 2004-06-02 06:05 PM


Awesome!!
Enjoyed. Chris

   Life itself is the most wonderful fairy tale.
                                          Hans Christian Anderson

Marge Tindal
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6 posted 2004-06-02 06:26 PM


Larry~
Realism draws such graphic poetic pictures~
Excellent~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram <))><

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