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Goldenrose
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0 posted 2004-06-02 05:28 AM


Laying listening to Beethoven,
reading Hughes, a tear rolled
singularly down my cheek,
moving thoughts of past things. The

thoughts flooded, washed into
me, relisation that i would never
control my sensitive emotions, for
the remainder of my life, blessed and cursed.

Switching on my phone, i do
as i do everyday, listen to
your voice on my messages.
The same tone that talked love.

Later warm bath water soothed
my body, i mused, i thought.
I think best in the bath, when things
are on my mind, lately i am spotless.




''Death where is thy sting? Love where is thy glory?'' William Shakespeare.

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just out of reach
1 posted 2004-06-02 06:16 PM


Later warm bath water soothed
my body, i mused, i thought.
I think best in the bath, when things
are on my mind, lately i am spotless.

These lines made me chuckle.
You write of your feelings well my friend.
hugs, Chris

   Life itself is the most wonderful fairy tale.
                                          Hans Christian Anderson

iliana
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2 posted 2004-06-02 06:40 PM


Flowing well and spotless!   ....jo
Suetang
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3 posted 2004-06-03 01:14 AM


Hello Phil

Being able to express yourself through writing is a wonderful gift that you have and I can only hope that your writing helps to bring you some comfort, my friend.

Take care........Sue


I am in motion
I am blue
Love is an ocean
I'm anchored in you
- Shawn Mullins

passing shadows
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4 posted 2004-06-03 02:31 AM


I think best while driving...good write GR
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