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Edder
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0 posted 06-02-2004 12:04 AM       View Profile for Edder   Email Edder   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Edder

Frustration
and a shattered mirror

seven years
spent
putting the pieces
back together

Now

I stand before you
a reflection of what was
knowing
image isn't everything...

© Copyright 2004 Edder - All Rights Reserved
iliana
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1 posted 06-02-2004 12:20 AM       View Profile for iliana   Email iliana   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for iliana

Edder -- WOW!!!!!!!!!!!
Snow
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desert flower looking for rain


2 posted 06-02-2004 12:32 AM       View Profile for Snow   Email Snow   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Snow's Home Page   View IP for Snow


biscuit,
you are so fanfriggintastic!!!!!

"yet each man kills the thing he loves
by each let this be heard,
some do it with a bitter look,
some with a flattering word"
oscar wilde

passing shadows
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displaced


3 posted 06-02-2004 02:10 AM       View Profile for passing shadows   Email passing shadows   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for passing shadows

awesome!
muted
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Elapsing, Eclipsing, Evolving


4 posted 06-02-2004 04:52 AM       View Profile for muted   Email muted   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for muted

a lesson learned
then recited
beautifully
Susan Caldwell
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5 posted 06-02-2004 08:25 AM       View Profile for Susan Caldwell   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Susan Caldwell

Ed~

You know I love this (and your computer is burping again).

"cast me gently into the morning, for the night has been unkind"
~Sarah McLachlan~

suthern
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on the threshold of a dream


6 posted 06-02-2004 11:06 AM       View Profile for suthern   Email suthern   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for suthern

It isn't... but it's so important to so many... and many of them never see the cracks in their own reflections. *S* And we spend so much time trying to put things back together... unwilling to accept that they'll never be the same...

With each read, this speaks more to me... and I'm loving the conversation. *S* This is excellent! *S*
Sunshine
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Listening to every heart


7 posted 06-02-2004 01:35 PM       View Profile for Sunshine   Email Sunshine   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Sunshine's Home Page   View IP for Sunshine


That packed
such a punch
that my own mirror
just shattered.
LeeJ
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since 06-19-2003
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SE PA


8 posted 06-02-2004 01:45 PM       View Profile for LeeJ   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for LeeJ

whoa!
Susan
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walking the surreal


9 posted 06-02-2004 02:49 PM       View Profile for Susan   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Susan

Excellent.

Susan

The whole of the Universe resides within each individual heart.

KoKo
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Inside the shadow's shadow


10 posted 06-02-2004 03:15 PM       View Profile for KoKo   Email KoKo   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for KoKo

Good job, Eddie.
SEA
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with you


11 posted 06-26-2004 12:07 PM       View Profile for SEA   Email SEA   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for SEA

"Now

I stand before you
a reflection of what was
knowing
image isn't everything..."


I loved this!!
Seymour Tabin
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12 posted 06-26-2004 12:32 PM       View Profile for Seymour Tabin   Email Seymour Tabin   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Seymour Tabin

Edder
Well done, enjoyed the read.
Enchantress
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Somewhere in time~


13 posted 06-26-2004 03:05 PM       View Profile for Enchantress   Email Enchantress   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Enchantress

WOW!!!  Rxcellent!!!
Hugs~

Something tugs at me, I've no doubt of that.
Something from the sea, whichever one I'm near.
When I stray too far from beachland, it calls me back

iliana
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since 12-05-2003
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14 posted 06-27-2004 03:10 AM       View Profile for iliana   Email iliana   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for iliana

Wow, Edder, this was great!  
Tequilia_Sunrise
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since 02-19-2003
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Lochalsh, Ontario, Canada


15 posted 07-08-2004 01:20 AM       View Profile for Tequilia_Sunrise   Email Tequilia_Sunrise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Tequilia_Sunrise

very well written, a thinker!
serenity blaze
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16 posted 08-15-2004 12:36 AM       View Profile for serenity blaze   Email serenity blaze   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for serenity blaze

Hey you...how did I miss this?

Marvelous write here.

and no, images mean nothing, but yet reflections hurt at times...

Miss ya my buddy. It's been a long worrisome summer here too.
 
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