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Edder
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0 posted 2004-06-02 12:04 PM


Frustration
and a shattered mirror

seven years
spent
putting the pieces
back together

Now

I stand before you
a reflection of what was
knowing
image isn't everything...


© Copyright 2004 Edder - All Rights Reserved
iliana
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1 posted 2004-06-02 12:20 PM


Edder -- WOW!!!!!!!!!!!
Snow
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2 posted 2004-06-02 12:32 PM



biscuit,
you are so fanfriggintastic!!!!!

"yet each man kills the thing he loves
by each let this be heard,
some do it with a bitter look,
some with a flattering word"
oscar wilde

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3 posted 2004-06-02 02:10 AM


awesome!
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Elapsing, Eclipsing, Evolving
4 posted 2004-06-02 04:52 AM


a lesson learned
then recited
beautifully

Susan Caldwell
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5 posted 2004-06-02 08:25 AM


Ed~

You know I love this (and your computer is burping again).

"cast me gently into the morning, for the night has been unkind"
~Sarah McLachlan~

suthern
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6 posted 2004-06-02 11:06 AM


It isn't... but it's so important to so many... and many of them never see the cracks in their own reflections. *S* And we spend so much time trying to put things back together... unwilling to accept that they'll never be the same...

With each read, this speaks more to me... and I'm loving the conversation. *S* This is excellent! *S*

Sunshine
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Listening to every heart
7 posted 2004-06-02 01:35 PM



That packed
such a punch
that my own mirror
just shattered.

LeeJ
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8 posted 2004-06-02 01:45 PM


whoa!
Susan
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9 posted 2004-06-02 02:49 PM


Excellent.

Susan

The whole of the Universe resides within each individual heart.

KoKo
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10 posted 2004-06-02 03:15 PM


Good job, Eddie.
SEA
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with you
11 posted 2004-06-26 12:07 PM


"Now

I stand before you
a reflection of what was
knowing
image isn't everything..."


I loved this!!

Seymour Tabin
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12 posted 2004-06-26 12:32 PM


Edder
Well done, enjoyed the read.

Enchantress
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Canada eh.
13 posted 2004-06-26 03:05 PM


WOW!!!  Rxcellent!!!
Hugs~

Something tugs at me, I've no doubt of that.
Something from the sea, whichever one I'm near.
When I stray too far from beachland, it calls me back

iliana
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14 posted 2004-06-27 03:10 AM


Wow, Edder, this was great!  
Tequilia_Sunrise
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15 posted 2004-07-08 01:20 AM


very well written, a thinker!
serenity blaze
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16 posted 2004-08-15 12:36 PM


Hey you...how did I miss this?

Marvelous write here.

and no, images mean nothing, but yet reflections hurt at times...

Miss ya my buddy. It's been a long worrisome summer here too.

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