stain the stars (an edder&snow dance)

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Snow

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since 2000-10-16

Posts 1170
desert flower looking for rain

0 posted 2004-05-31 08:27 PM

stain the stars

silk-wrapped
silence and puddles
of pearl secrets
dripped upon
seared skin

feathered
worlds stroke
midnight's
submission
neath
Luna's lustful
eye

tongue traveled
ink pebbles
where
chilled passion
stains
the stars

and i succumb
to a whisper of you...

©Edder&Snow'04

"yet each man kills the thing he loves
by each let this be heard,
some do it with a bitter look,
some with a flattering word"
oscar wilde

Nightshade

Member Patricius

since 2001-08-31

Posts 13962
just out of reach

1 posted 2004-05-31 09:50 PM

Brava!!! Excellent duet. Enjoyed. Chris

Life itself is the most wonderful fairy tale.
Hans Christian Anderson

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

2 posted 2004-06-01 02:37 AM

yes!

muted

Member Elite

since 2004-01-15

Posts 2949
Elapsing, Eclipsing, Evolving

3 posted 2004-06-01 02:08 PM

this is HOT stuff
whew
need a glass of water now

Edder
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since 2003-04-02

Posts 671

4 posted 2004-06-01 10:42 PM

once again, i thank you for the dance (sorry about your toes)

Snow

Senior Member

since 2000-10-16

Posts 1170
desert flower looking for rain

5 posted 2004-06-01 11:14 PM

a dance that i will always come away... from wanting, more.... :-)
thank you all for the comments!

"yet each man kills the thing he loves
by each let this be heard,
some do it with a bitter look,
some with a flattering word"
oscar wilde

[This message has been edited by Snow (06-02-2004 03:54 PM).]

steavenr
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since 2003-11-17

Posts 4058

6 posted 2004-06-02 03:46 PM

beautiful duet...I hesitate to call attention to any lines in particular when the entire write is sooooooooo good. Encore, please!

Susan Caldwell
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-12-27

Posts 8348
Florida

7 posted 2004-06-02 03:49 PM

Very nice job you two!!!

"cast me gently into the morning, for the night has been unkind"
~Sarah McLachlan~

iliana
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since 2003-12-05

Posts 13434
USA

8 posted 2004-06-04 02:49 AM

Awesome, you two!

JL
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since 2004-04-01

Posts 6128
Texas, USA

9 posted 2004-06-04 11:00 AM

Great! Enjoyed!!

JL

She said: ”You look cute in the dark.”

suthern

Member Seraphic

since 1999-07-29

Posts 20723
Louisiana

10 posted 2004-06-04 11:35 AM

Absolutely seamless... absolutely fantastic! *S*

Snow

Senior Member

since 2000-10-16

Posts 1170
desert flower looking for rain

11 posted 2004-06-04 01:48 PM

thank you all so much!!!

especially, biscuit. :-)

"yet each man kills the thing he loves
by each let this be heard,
some do it with a bitter look,
some with a flattering word"
oscar wilde

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