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inkedgoddess
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-19

Posts 7392
Ohio

0 posted 2004-05-31 05:37 PM

How wide you've grown
spreading your colorful fan
along the face of sky,

and the echos of green
that crawl up
and beneath you,

and the songbird of
the rose painted throat
that sings in triumph
of the season,

spring has come!

and surpassed
the promise of
her expectation,

some might say
it's simply landscape
or background music to
life's theme,

but to me,
as this touch unseen,
tossles my hair, then
stirs the miles of green,

it's life's validation,
as i share the breeze
and breathe, with all
that moves both beyond
and beneath me.

[This message has been edited by inkedgoddess (06-01-2004 07:46 AM).]

iliana
Member Patricius

since 2003-12-05

Posts 13434
USA

1 posted 2004-05-31 05:49 PM

Inked One -- this is gorgeous -- and a validation in and of itself!

....jo

gemjop
Member Elite

since 2002-11-18

Posts 2587
Pencilveinia, USA

2 posted 2004-05-31 06:31 PM

but to me,
as this touch unseen,
tossles my hair, then
stirs the miles of green,

it's life's validation,
as i share the breeze
and breathe with all
that moves both
beyond and beneath me.

This makes me feel whole. *library*

BluesSerenade
Member Patricius

since 2001-10-23

Posts 10549
By the Seaside

3 posted 2004-05-31 07:23 PM

Your words are like a warm breeze, stirring.

So beautiful, you~

Dark Angel
Member Patricius

since 1999-08-04

Posts 10095

4 posted 2004-05-31 07:28 PM

I LOVE THIS! Wow!

Maree

The clouds never expect it when it rains, but the sea, changes colour, but the sea, does not change.
~Stevie Nicks~

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

5 posted 2004-06-01 02:38 AM

I needed this

thanks girl

inkedgoddess
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-19

Posts 7392
Ohio

6 posted 2004-06-01 07:51 AM

thanks kids; glad you understood

choshi
Senior Member

since 2004-01-01

Posts 1184
New York

7 posted 2004-06-01 08:25 AM

The sun at dusk,
flickers on spring's full blossoms
with a moment's light-
though hidden behind the hills
its burning glow still remains.

muted

Member Elite

since 2004-01-15

Posts 2949
Elapsing, Eclipsing, Evolving

8 posted 2004-06-01 01:59 PM

"some might say
it's simply landscape
or background music to
life's theme,

but to me,
as this touch unseen,
tossles my hair, then
stirs the miles of green,

it's life's validation,
as i share the breeze
and breathe, with all
that moves both beyond
and beneath me."
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what could i possibly say that would compliment this enough??
can i just say "YES YES"?

bklynboy
Senior Member

since 2002-12-15

Posts 660
florida

9 posted 2004-06-01 04:33 PM

Mar-vel-ous

inkedgoddess
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-19

Posts 7392
Ohio

10 posted 2004-06-01 07:35 PM

thanks kids

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