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Foxyoasis
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since 2003-06-10
Posts 974
Atlantic Beach,Fla

0 posted 2004-05-30 06:42 PM







Your kiss ahh boy do
I miss your sweet
tender lips pressed
up against mine..

Time ticks by ever
so slowly like a
cat sleeping sound
my heart how it beats
for you Oh to the day
when I see you!

What a day it would be
the dream of my dreams
yes it will finally be
the love beneanth my
captivation for your
arms to hug me so
close.

To tell me everything is
okay just for that one
moument in time I wish
I could go back and meet
you all over again

To get that tender ever so
loving sweet kiss of
compassion and embrace
it with all of my very
being..

© Copyright 2004 Julie O'Neill - All Rights Reserved
Earth Angel
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1 posted 2004-05-30 07:04 PM


His kiss sounds very tender and sweet, indeed!

To love and romance!

EA

Foxyoasis
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2 posted 2004-05-30 07:55 PM


amen! hehe
*Belabebeautiful*
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since 2003-01-03
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3 posted 2004-05-30 09:45 PM


You have just put into words all that I have been feeling these last few days. This touched me very deeply, it is a very emotional, very beautiful piece...
~Live and Laugh~

The memories are worth the pain when the happiness is outweighs the sorrow
~Bella~

Foxyoasis
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4 posted 2004-05-30 11:27 PM


aww thanks
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