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Bonnie j
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since 2003-06-27

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Ohio

0 posted 2004-05-30 01:47 PM

Lace Hidden In The Folds of Satin

Sheer curtains drifting on a balcony of white-
The wind.....
Sending a message to the sea of the passions within
marbled walls.
Words..... dashing upon the waters leaving
invisible prints of lovers in love.
Limbs tangled
in
satin sheets covered with the perfume
of
captivating rose petals of the mind.
Creamy skin touched by the dew of love.
A cooling breeze caressing the lips of passionate dreams.
Fingers trailing down succulent curves .
Tender kisses being shared.
As night continues to travel into the corridors of passion.
You may experience-
Lace Hidden In The Folds of Satin.

Love BonBon

GG
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since 2002-12-03

Posts 3532
Lost in thought

1 posted 2004-05-30 02:15 PM

Oh my, this is definitely sensuous and full of passion!
Wow.. well done!

Always, Alyssa

Poems are made by fools like me,
But only God can make a tree.
Joyce kilmer

MGROVES

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since 2004-02-01

Posts 3802
california

2 posted 2004-05-30 03:05 PM

oh what passion

soft and sensual
exquisite

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26

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displaced

3 posted 2004-05-31 03:06 AM

you are delightful

iliana
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since 2003-12-05

Posts 13434
USA

4 posted 2004-05-31 01:58 PM

Whew...BonBon...lacey, no racey (hehehe) writing here. No, really, this was very evocative. Good job.

Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14

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Canada eh.

5 posted 2004-05-31 02:19 PM

Softly sensual and much enjoyed.
Hugs~

~Somewhere in my heart I'm always
Dancing with you in the summer rain~

Jaime Fradera
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since 2000-11-25

Posts 843
Where no tyranny is tolerable

6 posted 2004-05-31 09:23 PM

Thank you, Love Bonnie Bon Bon. Bon Bon
for the glimpse
into the lush sattin recesses of what must surely be a deep and giving spirit ...
And your signoff,
Love Bonnie Bon Bon
Love Bonnie Bon Bon ...
I love it!
The sound of it ...
Gugs,
Jaime

Jaime Fradera
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since 2000-11-25

Posts 843
Where no tyranny is tolerable

7 posted 2004-05-31 09:49 PM

O, love bonnie Bon Bon ..
Can I borrow this fantasy?
Keeps running through my mind ...
Love Bonnie Bo ... ... ...

Jaime Fradera
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since 2000-11-25

Posts 843
Where no tyranny is tolerable

8 posted 2004-05-31 09:56 PM

Ooops! I screwed up.
It's NOT Bonnie Bon Bon after all .
It's love bon bon.
I bette get off here and go do something else.
Hugs
Jaime

Bonnie j
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since 2003-06-27

Posts 1588
Ohio

9 posted 2004-05-31 10:01 PM

So glad everyone liked my poem. Ever so often I have to see if I can get steamy LOL.

Jaime
You may call me BonBon. It was a pet name my sister used to call me as I was growing up.
People at work also have called me BonBon or Bon.
When I wrote this one I closed my eyes and imagined a little cottage by the sea and went from there.
See Ya
BonBon

Susan
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since 2004-03-27

Posts 5104
walking the surreal

10 posted 2004-05-31 10:18 PM

Silky. Mmm, Mmm, very nice.

Susan

The whole of the Universe resides within each individual heart.

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

11 posted 2004-06-01 12:47 PM

This would be a nice experience...James

*Belabebeautiful*

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since 2003-01-03

Posts 696
washington, USA

12 posted 2004-06-01 01:31 AM

so passonatly beautiful...This just tugged at all my hopless romantic heartstrings!! I loved it, very well written!
~Live and Laugh~

The memories are worth the pain when the happiness is outweighs the sorrow
~Bella~

Ratleader

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Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass

13 posted 2004-06-01 11:00 PM

I can even taste this....beautiful, simply beautiful....and lucky is the one who will hear it read aloud....

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LeeJ
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since 2003-06-19

Posts 13296

14 posted 2004-06-02 06:05 AM

this one is amazing sis, it took me to an island basking within dreams with that special someone...simply lovely as is your heart...thank you for sharing not only your profound words, but also such a lovely picture. Happy Day to you.

JL
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since 2004-04-01

Posts 6128
Texas, USA

15 posted 2004-06-02 05:06 PM

Beautiful artistry and poetry! Good one Bonnie J.

JL

She said: ”You look cute in the dark.”

Nightshade

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since 2001-08-31

Posts 13962
just out of reach

16 posted 2004-06-02 06:10 PM

Just lovely Bonnie. hugs, Chris

Life itself is the most wonderful fairy tale.
Hans Christian Anderson

Marge Tindal

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since 1999-11-06

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Florida's Foreverly Shores

17 posted 2004-06-02 06:24 PM

Bonnie~
Delicately laced thoughts so beautifully presented~
Love it gal~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram <))><

noles1@totcon.com

Jaime Fradera
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since 2000-11-25

Posts 843
Where no tyranny is tolerable

18 posted 2004-06-03 08:29 PM

Hi Bon ..
At a writer’s converence a few years ago, I read one of my poems, and because there were many local sighted folk present, there was a dixcussion about blind writers using visual imagery. My contribution to the talk was to say that we all use the same language, metaphors, colors, and imagination.. I encounter sighted folk who think it’s “terrible” not having eyesight, but for a moment you let me partake of yours.
Jaime

Bonnie j
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since 2003-06-27

Posts 1588
Ohio

19 posted 2004-06-03 09:09 PM

Jaime
A lot of times I close my eyes and visualize what I'm going to write. I try to take the reader to place I see within my mind.
Is there any place you love to travel within your mind? Maybe I have something I will be able to share with you and the poets of PIP.

That is interesting about the blind reading and writing and there thoughts of colors and textures ect.

I'm also in a writer's forum and find it very educational and of course lots of fun.

See Ya
BonBon

suthern

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since 1999-07-29

Posts 20723
Louisiana

20 posted 2004-06-04 10:39 AM

Oh, wow. *S* Delicate and delicious... soft and sensual... this is a beauty! *S*

jwesley
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since 2000-04-30

Posts 7563
Spring, Texas

21 posted 2004-06-04 10:41 PM

Steamy? Now there's an understatement! And I will not say anymore either...loved it...

jwesley

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