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0 posted 2004-05-29 05:53 AM




as a warm
summers breeze
your words
brought me to my knees
softly replacing
warmth in my heart
releasing the coldness
as my pain began to part
as you reached out
across the land
my spirit rose
as my soul felt your hand
a touch
so soft and tender
love
the way i remember
gentle and kind
soothing
to one'sburning mind
i felt your soul
wipe away my tears
your spirits wings
chased away my fears
as fast as that
breeze blew in
gently caressing
my skin
back across
the land it went
leaving me with the taste
of love that only heaven could of sent


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1 posted 2004-05-29 06:14 AM


Very nice..such beautiful thoughts....
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2 posted 2004-05-29 06:15 AM


thankyou


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3 posted 2004-05-29 06:28 AM


lovely
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4 posted 2004-05-29 09:46 AM


This poem is absolutely heavenly! Thoroughly enjoyed! Made me feel all warm and fuzzy inside and put a great big smile on my face!



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5 posted 2004-05-29 12:08 PM


So pretty!!!!!  I really like this one... I think I'm gonna keep it

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6 posted 2004-05-29 12:28 PM


oh....oh my....this is just lovely...I don't have the words to say how touching this is...beautiful!
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7 posted 2004-05-29 02:45 PM


Great write!

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8 posted 2004-05-29 02:47 PM


Very lovely Marsha....much enjoyed the warmth of this piece.
Hugs~

~Somewhere in my heart I'm always
Dancing with you in the summer rain~

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9 posted 2004-05-29 02:51 PM


thankyou all so much


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10 posted 2004-05-29 03:10 PM


i felt your soul
wipe away my tears
your spirits wings
chased away my fears
as fast as that
breeze blew in
gently caressing
my skin
back across
the land it went
leaving me with the taste
of love that only heaven could of sent


Oh yes, that is how it feels...
Hugs,
Ethel

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11 posted 2004-05-29 03:14 PM


Marsha, that you for sharing what heaven sent; I can feel the love in this being passed forward.   ....jo
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12 posted 2004-05-29 04:30 PM


Dear Marsha, this is exquisite!

Ahhhh .....

Love and hugs. Margherita

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13 posted 2004-05-29 06:14 PM


MGROVES
Well done, enjoyed.

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14 posted 2004-05-30 12:37 PM


Very tender...James
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15 posted 2004-05-30 02:47 AM


thank you all so much for your warm replies it is nice to feel a little heaven, even if it is just once. something you never forget. love all of you


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16 posted 2004-05-30 05:20 AM


    

like a cool nights
summer breeze
you have helped
where others only sieze      
like taking a walk
across soft sand              
you have reach out
with a generous hand
along with a peace
of mind
comes a friend
so kind
i know it isnt
easy to do          
trusting others
believing their true
the sun comes up
and goes down each day
people come and go
only a few will stay
speak with your heart
not from your fear
reach out a hand
chase away a tear        
take a chance
what harm could there be
open your door
set your soul free
a friend for life
a treasure when found
replaces the song        
when you can't hear a sound
you've touched my soul
brought it back to me
replaced a smile
i thought i'd never see
never doubt
my friendship to you
my heart speaks
words so true                  
you opened your heart
words gentle and kind
for that
doubt
will never into my mind
so how
can you say                      
why go on          
another day
if it was't
for you
i never would of found
the strength to get me through
so my shadowy one
may you always rise
as a new days sun        


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