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GlisteningRain
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since 2004-05-06

Posts 103
The clouds

0 posted 2004-05-29 05:16 AM

Passing through shadows of a
Romantic heart
heaves hopeless specs of water
falling like feathers
feel passionate
as humans
Don't always like each other

Lovely
ethereal beings wrapped up
In a piece of candy
eaten lusciously tasted
tasted the taste of an angel
loved by you

Glow
Petals of a black void
void of man
void of woman
void of love
Love the glowing petals of a flower
a flower so fragile
winds bend it every which way
at the stem
of a void
void of sight
void of thought
void of reason

MGROVES

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since 2004-02-01

Posts 3802
california

1 posted 2004-05-29 05:23 AM

i really liked this. very good

Kaoru

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since 2003-06-07

Posts 3892
where the wild flowers grow

2 posted 2004-05-29 05:56 AM

I understand..

Goldenrose
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since 2003-05-30

Posts 3665

3 posted 2004-05-29 06:11 AM

Liked and enjoyed reading this....

HopeS
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since 2000-12-22

Posts 4596
Perth Western Australia

4 posted 2004-05-29 06:26 AM

wow ,wonderful descriptions , this was so good

Hope

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

5 posted 2004-05-29 12:53 PM

awesome!

ThisDiamond
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-02-22

Posts 9353
Michigan, USA

6 posted 2004-05-29 01:12 PM

Well done
TD

BluesSerenade
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since 2001-10-23

Posts 10549
By the Seaside

7 posted 2004-05-29 11:46 PM

Love the glowing petals of a flower
a flower so fragile
winds bend it every which way

Very pretty, and so true~

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

8 posted 2004-05-30 12:35 PM

Enjoyed...James

marcel
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since 2003-03-02

Posts 660
az, usa

9 posted 2004-05-30 12:48 PM

very creative and well expressed!

Dark Angel
Member Patricius

since 1999-08-04

Posts 10095

10 posted 2004-05-30 05:15 PM

Love the glowing petals of a flower
a flower so fragile
winds bend it every which way
at the stem

Enjoyed the imagery in these lines.

The clouds never expect it when it rains, but the sea, changes colour, but the sea, does not change.
~Stevie Nicks~

GlisteningRain
Member

since 2004-05-06

Posts 103
The clouds

11 posted 2004-05-30 05:19 PM

You guys are so awesome! ^_^! Thanks...I didn't really expect that.

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